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Reconsidered Approach

A dapper old fellow from Toledo Possessed a super active libido Searching for a bride Then, losing his stride Finally gave up wearing his speedo. Written April 27, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/28/2021 10:16:00 PM

Oh, man, how uncomfortable was that!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/29/2021 8:22:00 AM

Funny, Caren. At first I wrote "a young filly from Toledo," but realized women don't wear speedos! So...well, I don't think they do, do they?

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/27/2021 3:54:00 PM

Ha, ha! Question: After he gave up (on his speedo), what was left?!! lol. Happy Tuesday evening, Milt. :) gw

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/27/2021 6:17:00 PM

Probably much less than he thought he had all those years!

Anselmo Boles

Date: 4/27/2021 11:24:00 AM

Concise, very clever and funny! Thumbs up L.M.H.!!---anselmo boles

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/27/2021 12:03:00 PM

Thanks a bushel, Anselmo. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

David Kavanagh

Date: 4/27/2021 9:05:00 AM

Ha good one Milton, I thought you where going to end on a biting mosquito, but the speedo line works just fine, cheers David

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/27/2021 6:18:00 PM

Okay by me!

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/27/2021 2:30:00 PM

Ha I’ll keep that in mind, we can share the royalties

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/27/2021 11:19:00 AM

It was originally a "young filly" from Toledo, but then I realized women don't wear Speedos!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/27/2021 11:18:00 AM

Hey, David, you can borrow this one and finish it up with "mosquito." LOL