Vince Suzadail Jr. Poet Rhyme

Reconcilliation

With these arms outstretched
With unending tears
With a heart aching
I can’t bring back the years
For all I’ve done
For what I didn’t do
I’m sorry now
And I’m missing you
Of all the emotions
That I’ve felt yet
The most hurting one 
Is called regret
I brought you storms
You brought me calm
For all the pain
I’m sorry Mom.

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Michael Jordan July 15, 2009 at 4:52 PM Vince my man congratulations on placing in Christie & Sharon’s contest – I apologize I wasn’t able to congratulate you until now, God Bless, MJ

Brian Strand July 1, 2009 at 11:36 PM Congrats on your success in Sharon/Christie's contest Vince.Rgds Brian

Carrie Richards July 1, 2009 at 6:02 PM I felt deeply when I read this the first time. No less this time....both as a mom and a child...I can relate to the emotions. Congratulations once more for this winning poem!

Raul Moreno July 1, 2009 at 5:13 PM Vince, congrats on your success in Sharon and Christies Contest...Raul

Yoni Dvorkis June 9, 2009 at 7:34 PM Very touching poem Vince. I was very surprised when the subject turned out to be your mother. I hope this work can help you make peace with her, wherever she is.

Charlene Bird June 9, 2009 at 9:06 AM Such a sweet and touching outreaching to a special being. You pour it from the heart Vince and I definitely respect that.

Carrie Richards June 8, 2009 at 3:59 PM This touches deeply, both as a daughter, and as a mother. I know as a daughter, there are things I wish I had done, or said differently...and as a mother, I understand that other side of the coin....the acceptance of my child,... the forgiving, unconditional love. She hears you, Vince...and it's okay...I'm convinced that she understands.

James Fraser June 8, 2009 at 2:45 PM Tender and loving poem to a special mom, delightful to read Vince>James

Heidie Buys June 8, 2009 at 2:18 PM A lovely tribute and so sadly true. Very well written and so very poignant. You sure know how to fiddle with my emotions. Love Heidie

Joyce Johnson June 8, 2009 at 12:27 PM That's what moms are for. I hope she reads your apology so sweetly given. thanks for your comments. Love, Joyce

Michael Torres June 8, 2009 at 10:50 AM Vince this poem brought a tear to my eye. I think most of us can relate to if we could go back ,what would we do differently to make things right very touching beautiful words very sincere. GBU Michael

L'Nass Shango June 8, 2009 at 9:29 AM Genuine repentance. Maybe you should let her see this if the opportunity is still open. -One love my friend