Reconciliation

What is this “me within me”?
Mute masquerade?
Immortality of a self,
A puff of worthless air,
Or  feelings so pure?
Can I bear wings
And an angelic creature be
To soar away
Into the screaming wind
Where no one can find me?
Shall I in my ignorance
Play lip service to gods unknown?
A fancy-dress life
Where questions are left unanswered,
Camouflage realization
Obfuscate the truth,
Sigh a metaphysical inquiry
Or embark on a voyage of discovery?
 
Yes I can fly amongst the clouds,
A ray of sunlight breaks through dark clouds.
Your name emanates from my lips.
Your glow repels all ugly shadows.
I bow my naked head in shame
That this miserable me dared forget You.
Echoes utter beloved vibrations,
Celestial music softly penetrate my soul,
Your presence almost too much to bear.
 
Once more I feel alive,
Reconciled to Your divine mercy.
Emotions spread far and deep in my veins,
Oh, to feel the warmth and comfort
As I bless Your sacred name.
 
The “me in me” is complex true,
Shame, vice but tenderness too.
I strive to cleanse the “me in me”
I feel Your hand stretched out to me,
Dispelling anger and pride
Kindly substituting them with grace.
Together we shall walk again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Proxenos Avatar
February 21, 2025 at 3:20 AM
Your imagination is intense it floats, celestially, above the clouds, globally to many parts of he world, jovially or sadly depending on your poetic mood at the time, passionately, adventurous, really scary, the king of romance you are my friend. Your talent unbelievably brilliant. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Cunningham Avatar
February 19, 2025 at 2:14 AM
The almighty is all forgiving, we only have to accept his outstretched hand and repent. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 4:11 PM
A spiritual one. Also philosophical. You are adept with so many themes, Victor
Gifford Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 5:57 AM
Hello Victor, this is a very heartfelt and touching poem. Loved the ending. Please don’t be so harsh on yourself, my dear friend. Wishing you a wonderful day and a great rest of the week. Stay Blessed.
Williams Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 2:08 AM
Dearest Victor what a masterpiece of a write. I'm sorry I havent been on PS a lot lately, I've been very busy at work. Anyway I'm glad I dropped in today just to check on one of faveourite poets to see how you are? So happy to see you are still creating masterpieces, a fave for me. Hugs xx
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February 18, 2025 at 1:39 AM
Dear Victor, do not torture yourself, dwell on the wonderful memories you made. No of us is perfect and regret some of the things we’ve said or done, you are no different from anyone. Your love is shining in the night, an angel staring in paradise… Beryl
Rodrigues Avatar
February 17, 2025 at 4:45 PM
We never forget, dare we a moment of forgertfulness, it returns…we love…we don’t forget… Hugs :)
Empress Avatar
February 17, 2025 at 7:17 AM
Dear victor, such a profound and well written poem that depicts the light within you and your spirituality: i really love the lines "I strive to cleanse the “me in me” I feel Your hand stretched out to me, Dispelling anger and pride Kindly substituting them with grace." If only many would do the same too, this world will be a brighter more pleasant place: pleasure reading this: sending you light always
Rodgers Avatar
February 17, 2025 at 5:48 AM
Dear Victor, What a journey that is wrestling with self, seeking truth, and ultimately finding reconciliation in divine mercy. I love how your imagery is stirring, the questions deeply human, and the resolution beautifully humbling. A moving, spiritual reflection. Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Kendrick Avatar
February 17, 2025 at 5:00 AM
I like this faith-based work that you so honorably have written for our reading. Sometimes we do get too much me inside and it interferes with our relationship to God, man and ourselves. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Andresen Avatar
February 17, 2025 at 12:59 AM
- A lovely poem, Victor :) - hugs
Greenhough Avatar
February 17, 2025 at 12:43 AM
I enjoy this poem with its happy ending. I sense a feeling that making amends is never too late.
Singh Avatar
February 16, 2025 at 9:23 PM
Purification and improvement of self and walk together with HIM.Beautiful.
Buehler Avatar
February 16, 2025 at 6:57 PM
I enjoyed this wonderful, story about God's patient, loving grace. What a wonderful gift forgiveness is! Lovely writing, Victor.
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