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Jan.1. 2025
Recognition Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Unseeking Seeker
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“Mistaken that I was this body-mind, I succumbed to desire and fell to fear but on choosing pathways loving and kind, light of God in heart began to appear and truth of my true essence became clear, which made in God’s image, is living light, gripping us in rapture of bliss delight.” --- By ~ Unseeking Seeker~ I had once lived a life so full of desire and fear Ignoring my soul and my Heavenly Sire My life was never in concord with God’s design It was not a path charted along the sacred line. Through several annoying twists and turns of life, As I passed, I discerned how life is with problems rife. When into my life afflictions one after another poured, I heard an inner calling to turn to the Almighty God. Killing my ego, I humbled myself and kneeled in prayer It saved me from drowning into the dark dungeons of despair, He touched me, giving assurance that he will always be near I could feel his love so strong, so steadfast and so clear. Soon the focus on my body got diverted into my soul Banishing all my fears, His love turned me whole. I now have a heart so kind, ready to wipe another’s tears And soothe the ailing souls and swipe away their cares. In God, I find all my comfort and an anchor strong His light illumines my dark paths and leads me along Into my heart and my life, I have invited Him to stay And through ups and downs, with Him, I face each day.

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Date: 1/18/2025 8:54:00 AM
Amen, beautiful. , For we should know it's not that we loved God but God loved us, ti send his son as a unblemished sacrifice, that we might receive the inheritance of the Holy Spirit, which gives a new path into thd light being purified into the likeness of Christ, much love and prayers for you all, Congratulations on the trophy, just checking in, hopefully to start writing again soon
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Date: 1/12/2025 3:05:00 PM
Who could put better Valsa big congratulations On your worthy poems win.!
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Date: 1/10/2025 3:47:00 AM
Dear sweet valsa, i can understand why this poem received a trophy, its so heartfelt and youv depicted what youv interpreted through the line of enquiry so well here, i especially love also the lines "I now have a heart so kind, ready to wipe another’s tears And soothe the ailing souls and swipe away their cares." Yes you are an empathetic and kind soul that we all are lucky to have here on soup and im lucky to br able to read! Hope 2025 is treating you well! Sending you light always. Congratulations on your well deserved win!
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Date: 1/5/2025 7:42:00 PM
Back with my congrats on your well deserved win
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Date: 1/4/2025 9:55:00 PM
I am so grateful to dear Seeker friend for this great 'recognition' conferred on my poem and the unexpected trophy win. Wish you dear friend, a Happy New Year of bliss , joy and peace.
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Date: 1/5/2025 3:28:00 AM
Well deserved, Valsa dear. Your poem selected itself, I had no role in it, God bless.
Date: 1/4/2025 11:23:00 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your contest's well-deserved trophy win, dear Valsa.
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Date: 1/4/2025 9:43:00 AM
Gorgeous testimony! Congratulations! Xo
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Date: 1/2/2025 9:43:00 AM
Lovely devotional poem. Happy New Year.
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Date: 1/2/2025 8:49:00 AM
This is wonderful. I think you nailed it, Valsa
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Date: 1/2/2025 2:15:00 AM
This great poem dwells on humanity, dealing with spiritual ideas and personal living. Most of us pass through life from the frivolous to God's calling. In the end, humility and love of God triumph. Wishing you success and a Happy New Year, dear Valsa.
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Date: 1/1/2025 2:13:00 PM
Dear Valsa, It is Such an incredible poem about spiritual awakening and progress. You reflect on the past, full of dreams and concerns, and realize the worth of turning to God for comfort, direction, and love. This path leads to personal development, a shift from ego to humility, and a dedication to serving others. It also explores themes of religion, redemption, inner conflict, and the healing power of divine love. It investigates the difference between a life driven by earthly pleasures and one guided by spiritual ideas. The poem's language is contemplative and expressive, with words like "desire," "fear," "afflictions," "love," and "despair" evoking strong emotions. The usage of "Almighty God" and "Heavenly Sire" conveys deference and formality, emphasizing the speaker's esteem and devotion. Best wishes for a prosperous New Year.
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Date: 1/1/2025 1:11:00 AM
Well written verse Valsa, your strong faith shines through in your words. Happy New year. Tom
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Date: 12/31/2024 10:42:00 PM
a moment of grace, believing in God happy new year
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