Recital of the Bee

Fertilizing rhymes,
Buzzing couplets in the Spring:
Pollinated verse.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Fraser Avatar
September 23, 2009 at 4:10 PM
Bee U tiful Raul, your buzzing man >> James
Canady Avatar
September 23, 2009 at 2:29 PM
And Why Would I Not Love This One... (he! he!) MoonBEE
Lopez Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 8:28 PM
poetry in motion my friend .... I love being a part of nature!
Goff Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 7:46 PM
poetic agriculture from a bee's perspective! nice! Raul!...jim
 Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 2:09 PM
What a wonderful way to weave writing and nature into this concise poem. The title enhances the piece and gives the reader a sneak of what lies ahead. Well thought out poem--reaches out on so many levels. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comment. Karen
Chircop Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 1:23 PM
excellent haiku ,beautiful,-Charma(and i did mine too not as good a syours of course:)-excellent work--Charma
Canady Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 11:17 AM
Of Course I Would Like This One... (Smile) Great Write as Usual Raul ... MoonBee
Richards Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 8:48 AM
Oh yes..ps...thank you so much Raul..for seeking out some of my older poems. A nice surprise to hear comments on older works! :)
Richards Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 7:53 AM
Oh wow......this one will be a hard one to follow...............!!! EXCELLENT!!
Devonshire Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 7:26 AM
Oh, what a joyous recital! Too bad we'll have to wait several months before the concert begins again. Nice write, Raul! Love, Carolyn
Townsend Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 6:37 AM
I really enjoyed this peice. Truly original and breathtaking. Well done, as always! Smiles from Lolita
Kendrick Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 2:06 AM
Interesting Haiku. The bees in numbers really turn a plant into music however it is scary for me. Thanks for your comments on my work. Keep writing. Sara
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace