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Recital of the Bee

Fertilizing rhymes, Buzzing couplets in the Spring: Pollinated verse.

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James Fraser

Date: 9/23/2009 4:10:00 PM

Bee U tiful Raul, your buzzing man >> James

Moonbee Canady

Date: 9/23/2009 2:29:00 PM

And Why Would I Not Love This One... (he! he!) MoonBEE

Abe Lopez

Date: 9/22/2009 8:28:00 PM

poetry in motion my friend .... I love being a part of nature!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/22/2009 7:46:00 PM

poetic agriculture from a bee's perspective! nice! Raul!...jim

Date: 9/22/2009 2:09:00 PM

What a wonderful way to weave writing and nature into this concise poem. The title enhances the piece and gives the reader a sneak of what lies ahead. Well thought out poem--reaches out on so many levels. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/22/2009 1:23:00 PM

excellent haiku ,beautiful,-Charma(and i did mine too not as good a syours of course:)-excellent work--Charma

Moonbee Canady

Date: 9/22/2009 11:17:00 AM

Of Course I Would Like This One... (Smile) Great Write as Usual Raul ... MoonBee

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/22/2009 8:48:00 AM

Oh yes..ps...thank you so much Raul..for seeking out some of my older poems. A nice surprise to hear comments on older works! :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/22/2009 7:53:00 AM

Oh wow......this one will be a hard one to follow...............!!! EXCELLENT!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/22/2009 7:26:00 AM

Oh, what a joyous recital! Too bad we'll have to wait several months before the concert begins again. Nice write, Raul! Love, Carolyn

Lena Townsend

Date: 9/22/2009 6:37:00 AM

I really enjoyed this peice. Truly original and breathtaking. Well done, as always! Smiles from Lolita

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/22/2009 2:06:00 AM

Interesting Haiku. The bees in numbers really turn a plant into music however it is scary for me. Thanks for your comments on my work. Keep writing. Sara