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Recital of the Bee

Fertilizing rhymes, Buzzing couplets in the Spring: Pollinated verse.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/23/2009 4:10:00 PM
Bee U tiful Raul, your buzzing man >> James
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Date: 9/23/2009 2:29:00 PM
And Why Would I Not Love This One... (he! he!) MoonBEE
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Date: 9/22/2009 8:28:00 PM
poetry in motion my friend .... I love being a part of nature!
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Date: 9/22/2009 7:46:00 PM
poetic agriculture from a bee's perspective! nice! Raul!...jim
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Date: 9/22/2009 2:09:00 PM
What a wonderful way to weave writing and nature into this concise poem. The title enhances the piece and gives the reader a sneak of what lies ahead. Well thought out poem--reaches out on so many levels. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 9/22/2009 1:23:00 PM
excellent haiku ,beautiful,-Charma(and i did mine too not as good a syours of course:)-excellent work--Charma
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Date: 9/22/2009 11:17:00 AM
Of Course I Would Like This One... (Smile) Great Write as Usual Raul ... MoonBee
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Date: 9/22/2009 8:48:00 AM
Oh yes..ps...thank you so much Raul..for seeking out some of my older poems. A nice surprise to hear comments on older works! :)
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Date: 9/22/2009 7:53:00 AM
Oh wow......this one will be a hard one to follow...............!!! EXCELLENT!!
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Date: 9/22/2009 7:26:00 AM
Oh, what a joyous recital! Too bad we'll have to wait several months before the concert begins again. Nice write, Raul! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/22/2009 6:37:00 AM
I really enjoyed this peice. Truly original and breathtaking. Well done, as always! Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 9/22/2009 2:06:00 AM
Interesting Haiku. The bees in numbers really turn a plant into music however it is scary for me. Thanks for your comments on my work. Keep writing. Sara
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