Reciprocal

Returning compliments
Received, a kind word to
Redeem a thoughtless tongue
Reach out to the shy ones
Remember when you were
Raw and blue, the one who
Relieved your wounded wings~

4/17/21

Pleiades R contest
Sponsor: Kim Merryman
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Lawrence Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 11:45 AM
Lovely... Raw and blue, the one who Relieved your wounded wings~ I love this ! Intimate and revealing. Congrats to you Michelle! All the best, Susan :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 3:56 PM
Hello Michelle Faulkner, yes this isso true. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Peck Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 9:23 AM
I love this! It's so true, so well put.
Kendrick Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 3:58 AM
Congrats on your win with this great Pleiades using the letter R. You've done well with these words. Your presence at my page is supportive. Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 12:59 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a word and write. Have a blessed day with your win...................
Ashley Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 6:18 PM
Ah, Michelle, such inspirational beauty spills gracefully from your exquisite pen. A great word chosen, a greater poem written. Superb, my dear friend. Congratulations for your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 6:27 PM
fave’n this. got a whole lot of words and can’t pick one. That’s how good you are. xomo <3
Allison Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 5:40 PM
what a lovely message Michelle, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Merryman Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 4:04 PM
Michelle, you chose a difficult word to describe but you did it very well! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
Neumann Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 2:52 AM
And the broken wings are healing ...
Leffanta Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 11:22 AM
Enjoyed! Aloha! Rico
Theraven Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 11:01 AM
Michelle, Reciprocal shared with a wonderful turn. A poem born of an agile mind, whose product is always a special one. -Richard
Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 10:19 AM
this is a really brilliant way to do R. you chose a great word and made it real poetry.
Wolf Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 7:42 AM
Great reminders all, Michelle! Happy Sunday! :) gw
Ligon Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 10:52 PM
Original topic idea for the letter "r." I hope your poem encourages many.
Horsman Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 9:06 PM
One amazing poem, a mission statement, for humanity.
Mcintosh Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 5:28 PM
Lovely writing, dear friend. Lovely words. God bless you always, Love, Gina
Y. Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 4:17 PM
WoW! Michelle, You described your title good in your well written write. You did well with the letter R.Your message was good too. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day and weekend:-) Alexis
Ermine Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 3:27 PM
Hi Michelle. Oh wow, this is absolutely spot on! Perfectly describes the hand we can extend, relatively painlessly, to lift someone significantly. Reciprocation is what our best relationships are built on. Much praise for your expression here, smoothly said.
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