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Recipient At Destiny's Doorstep

Images roll daily trampled by incivility Far away enough yet close to humanity Mired by evil, engrossed in misery Where being born feels like a tragedy. Longing for mercy, smile tries to emerge Straining weary mind every grin hurts Yet, life goes on unfazed by distress Amid stormy rain wishing for a sunny day. Untouched by pain world disdain reigns, Forlorn eyes concede burden of debt Paying it with pride extracted from dignity For being a recipient at destiny's doorstep. March 27, 2018

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Valsa George
Date: 5/15/2022 9:22:00 PM
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Life is a concoction of happiness and sorrow dominated more by pain than by joy...! "Yet, life goes on unfazed by distress Amid stormy rain wishing for a sunny day.".... Yes, this is all we can do. Impressive presentation !
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 11/17/2018 6:40:00 PM
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Hi Vijay, a deep and powerful piece of poetry you have layed before us. A most interesting write indeed. A true, real piece of poetry that has beauty within its sadness. The beauty comes from the way you convey your words. A deep and touching write my friend. We should all be left some dignity. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 3/30/2018 11:06:00 AM
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This is so deep... But beautifully done... Loved it...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/30/2018 5:08:00 PM
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Thank you Supraja.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/28/2018 3:27:00 PM
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A sad statement of human characteristic, Vijay yet we must own it. so very well expressed !!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2018 3:51:00 PM
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Thank you Mike..appreciate your thoughts and comments.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/28/2018 3:03:00 PM
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It seems so sad that some have such sad destinies compared to others. And yet we all end up at that great doorstep. Nice metaphor, Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2018 3:51:00 PM
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Appreciate your thoughts and comments, Andrea..many thanks.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/28/2018 2:34:00 PM
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- A true and meaningful poem, Vijay :) - Lovely Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2018 3:50:00 PM
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Thank you Anne-Lise...Happy Easter to you!
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/28/2018 12:32:00 PM
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There's a lot to get by being a recipient at destiny's doorstep...but we were made to handle it...Happy Easter Vijay...All the best
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2018 1:52:00 PM
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Many thanks Arturo. Happy Easter to you!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/28/2018 9:19:00 AM
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A deep powerful poem Vijay. Well done. Happy Easter :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2018 11:01:00 AM
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Happy Easter to you Heidi! Thank you for your kind feedback.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/28/2018 6:52:00 AM
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Profound poem, impressive language, sound messages my friend, Vijay! Much enjoyed!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2018 7:56:00 AM
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Thank you Demetrios..enjoyed reading your encouraging words.
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Silent One
Date: 3/28/2018 6:48:00 AM
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Some rhyme in your free verse, no one can control their destiny, one day we will all knock upon that door.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2018 7:55:00 AM
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Thank you Silent One..appreciate your comments.
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Yazmin Malik
Date: 3/28/2018 6:46:00 AM
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Deep pen :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2018 7:54:00 AM
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Thank you for your visit and comments, Yazmin.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/27/2018 10:23:00 PM
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Effective use of figurative language, Vijay! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2018 7:54:00 AM
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Thank you Janice.
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/27/2018 7:26:00 PM
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Vijay, enjoyed reading. Bless you on a great Easter. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2018 7:53:00 AM
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Thank you Eve..happy Easter to you as well!

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