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Reception

There is no fireplace in your room so I cannot come up; still, the borders of your smile eclipse my ambivalence, warn of belatedness. I journey home and slip into sleep fix my gaze into nightspace, linger half-awake, remember your whispers when we were seventeen.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/13/2008 8:39:00 AM
A touch of melancholy, a bittersweet memory, an exceptional poem. Vince
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Date: 11/13/2008 7:57:00 AM
Thank you for the nice comment. I'm not sure why I don't use punctuation...makes it feel like work to me (?) I love your piece...I loved being 17...
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Date: 11/12/2008 11:58:00 PM
This is a very creative piece, keep up the good work...Raul
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