Recalling Childhood

dramatic swooshing

sugar maple expecting

cloudburst thunderstorm

little girl’s long hair askew

wild green-apple eyes alive


11/9/2019
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Perrin Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 4:43 AM
Love this! Great imagery xx
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 6:06 AM
Thank you, Elaine!
Mcintosh Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 3:58 AM
Love this. You did it perfectly. Love to you dear friend, Blessings too, Gina
Rodrigues Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 4:34 AM
Thank you, sweet poet! Blessings...Kim
Wolf Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 7:33 PM
Ah, that last line swoops up all the others and cradles them so cozily and comfortably. Love it, Green Eyes! ~ Wide-eyed with Wonder
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 7:47 PM
Thanks, Gershon! <3
One Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 3:39 PM
interesting memories.. not sure if it is a happy one...
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 7:15 PM
I’ve always loved a storm brewing.
Faulkner Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 2:58 PM
I love the 'sugar maple' and 'green apple eyes' (maybe I'm getting hungry!)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 7:15 PM
LOL, Michelle! :)
Pandit Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 11:33 AM
Great imagery in memories of childhood, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 2:32 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
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