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Recalling Childhood

dramatic swooshing sugar maple expecting cloudburst thunderstorm little girl’s long hair askew wild green-apple eyes alive 11/9/2019

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Elaine Perrin

Date: 11/12/2019 4:43:00 AM

Love this! Great imagery xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2019 6:06:00 AM

Thank you, Elaine!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/11/2019 3:58:00 AM

Love this. You did it perfectly. Love to you dear friend, Blessings too, Gina

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2019 4:34:00 AM

Thank you, sweet poet! Blessings...Kim

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/10/2019 7:33:00 PM

Ah, that last line swoops up all the others and cradles them so cozily and comfortably. Love it, Green Eyes! ~ Wide-eyed with Wonder

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2019 7:47:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon! <3

Silent One

Date: 11/10/2019 3:39:00 PM

interesting memories.. not sure if it is a happy one...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2019 7:15:00 PM

I’ve always loved a storm brewing.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/10/2019 2:58:00 PM

I love the 'sugar maple' and 'green apple eyes' (maybe I'm getting hungry!)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2019 7:15:00 PM

LOL, Michelle! :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/10/2019 11:33:00 AM

Great imagery in memories of childhood, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2019 2:32:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay!