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Rebirth

Winter lacks a fresh air balm
Her sunshine rends little heat
Spring lilacs bloom in glory
Too warm, Winter sleeps

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Carol Sunshine Brown

January 14, 2011 at 10:45 AM

Congratulations William on your well deserved win in Francine Robert's contest "Bring On Spring". Love, Carol

Charles Henderson

January 10, 2011 at 8:14 PM

William I could do with a bit of that sleeping winter around here (SC). We're white everywhere. Good write, Charles

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 10, 2011 at 8:14 AM

Congratulations on this well deserv ed win in the contest, William

Andrea Dietrich

January 9, 2011 at 2:03 PM

Congratulations, William, glad this little gem made winners' circle. Luv ,Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 9, 2011 at 9:33 AM

Congrats Will on your success in the Bring on Spring contest with this lovely version of spring time .. enjoy with luv..

Sara Kendrick

January 9, 2011 at 9:18 AM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Ralph Taylor

January 9, 2011 at 9:11 AM

Congrats, Bill. Excellent dodoitsu. Nice going. Enjoyed. Have a great week. Ralph

Joyce Johnson

January 8, 2011 at 10:58 PM

You got all the words in four lines. Very clever. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Kash Poet

January 8, 2011 at 9:03 PM

Very cute ! Congratulations on your well deserved win!

Barbara Gorelick

January 8, 2011 at 7:21 PM

I love the short forms..you said so much in a few words..congrats. BG

Carolyn Devonshire

January 8, 2011 at 7:08 PM

Gosh, you said it ALL so perfectly in just four lines, William! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts

January 8, 2011 at 6:54 PM

thanks for supporting my contest Will and congrats on your 9th place win

Audrey Haick

January 6, 2011 at 12:03 PM

This is like a breath of fresh air, William. Totally enjoyed as I'm just about ready for spring as winter still sleeps! Thanks for reading my poem and the kind comments too. Always, Audrey