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actuality … begins or ends ... with moments of twilight not in deference to the wax or wane of day rather, states of being or contemplation the gentle shores of regard where features of the day are swept back washed onto sands of prescience mixed with the vagaries of coming dreams a soft-swirling tide of cognizance and misty meanderings that fanciful place on either side of slumber he muse is most vulnerable then defenses of sensibility and estimation, weakened mindfulness and spirit, laid bare that is, so often, the rich soil of the poetic being where the seeds of creativity are sown the divine hand of inspiration scattering the good grain to find purchase, deep in the imagination the warmth of wit and talent, bursting forth budding to fragrant bloom in the quiet corners ... of the day. ~ 3rd Place ~ in the "Brian's Choice X, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 4th Place ~ in the "Premiere Contest Number 175" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 5/28/2020 9:17:00 AM
I love the metaphors you used here...just swept me along. Congrats Gregory on a fine win.
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Date: 9/12/2018 7:30:00 PM
wonderful sweeping sounds in this imagery filled poem, nice work
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/19/2018 3:23:00 AM
What a wonderful comment, my friend ... thank you very much! :-)
Date: 9/9/2018 8:34:00 PM
Beautiful, Gregory. Congrats on your win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/10/2018 3:35:00 PM
Thank you very much, Line - blessings, friend! :-) <3
Date: 9/9/2018 5:56:00 PM
Oh yes, I know this feeling, Greg, but you have brought it to life with words like no other. I love to be in that place... "A soft-swirling tide of cognizance and misty meanderings...That fanciful place on either side of slumber...Budding to fragrant bloom...In the quiet corners...of the day." Congratulations on your fine win! Another Fav for me! Sandra :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/10/2018 3:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra, that's very sweet of you ... I knew you would relate to this, (as your words speak so much to me about your heart and motivations). When I first read your work I felt an innate connection to you, and I have been so blessed by your friendship and marvelous writing! Love and best wishes to you, Dear Poet! :-) <3
Date: 9/9/2018 3:34:00 PM
Oh, this was really good Gregory. Really in-depth enough for me to actually picture the scene. :) Congrats on your win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/10/2018 3:31:00 PM
That means a lot to me, Francesca, and I thank you so much for the kind words! Blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 9/8/2018 12:50:00 PM
Well crafted my friend...and I agree with what you said to Sunlite...same in music...sometimes the 'b' sides would be #1...love & 'b' sides...^WW^
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/9/2018 12:25:00 PM
Amen, my friend, well-said ... thank you so much, I'm pleased you liked this one. Blessings ^WW^! :-)
Date: 9/7/2018 2:20:00 PM
Very pretty reading!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/7/2018 7:41:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sunlite ... this isn't getting a lot of comments, but it is special to me personally. Ironic how (sometimes) the ones we like most as poets, don't always strike that many chords elsewhere. Blessings, friend! :-) <3

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