Paloma P Poet Light Verse

Realm of Illusioned Seas

Elusive moon beckons dark currents,
     sand's sparkling pageantry  
             drifts out amidst frothing tide,
submerging lover's imprints 'neath
     realms of alluring seascape illusions

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Joseph P. DiMino October 8, 2016 at 10:25 AM Lovely read. Perfect! Truth be told, all is illusion--so why not choose the alluring seascape? I agree. Paloma P October 8, 2016 at 11:09 AM True, so true! They've written songs about it. Thanks Joe "It's life's illusions I recall"

Charmaine Chircop October 7, 2016 at 3:01 AM Outstanding..Welcome to PS..sweet lady.: ) Paloma P October 7, 2016 at 5:27 AM Thank you, much appreciate the welcome and review. :)

Sara Kendrick October 6, 2016 at 3:50 PM I like the feel of this one sand's pageantry drifts..I can feel the sand moving underfoot as the sea froths back and forth..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Paloma P October 6, 2016 at 7:29 PM And thank you for such a lovely poetic review.

Tim Smith October 6, 2016 at 3:17 PM So lovely Paloma. Welcome to PS. Paloma P October 6, 2016 at 7:29 PM Thanks Tim for the warm welcome and commenting, much appreciated. Nice to meet you.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 6, 2016 at 1:54 PM - I enjoy reading your beautiful and romantic poems, Paloma - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paloma P October 6, 2016 at 2:28 PM Kind of you to say Anne-Lise, nice to meet you! :)

Daniel Turner October 6, 2016 at 1:10 PM Very romantic write, Paloma. I wrote a longer version on the same sort of topic entitled "Discretion" If you decide to read. Paloma P October 6, 2016 at 2:27 PM Thanks Daniel, I'll be sure to check it out.

Chris Green October 6, 2016 at 11:31 AM I just love this little poem. There is so much love and desire expressed in so few words. Give me a poetic beach of love and I am happy. Mesmerizing Paloma. Paloma P October 6, 2016 at 2:26 PM I'd love a poetic beach of love, thanks Chris! :)