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Realm of Illusioned Seas

Elusive moon beckons dark currents, sand's sparkling pageantry drifts out amidst frothing tide, submerging lover's imprints 'neath realms of alluring seascape illusions

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Joe Dimino

Date: 10/8/2016 10:25:00 AM

Lovely read. Perfect! Truth be told, all is illusion--so why not choose the alluring seascape? I agree.

Paloma P
Date: 10/8/2016 11:09:00 AM

True, so true! They've written songs about it. Thanks Joe "It's life's illusions I recall"

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/7/2016 3:01:00 AM

Outstanding..Welcome to PS..sweet lady.: )

Paloma P
Date: 10/7/2016 5:27:00 AM

Thank you, much appreciate the welcome and review. :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/6/2016 3:50:00 PM

I like the feel of this one sand's pageantry drifts..I can feel the sand moving underfoot as the sea froths back and forth..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Paloma P
Date: 10/6/2016 7:29:00 PM

And thank you for such a lovely poetic review.

Tim Smith

Date: 10/6/2016 3:17:00 PM

So lovely Paloma. Welcome to PS.

Paloma P
Date: 10/6/2016 7:29:00 PM

Thanks Tim for the warm welcome and commenting, much appreciated. Nice to meet you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/6/2016 1:54:00 PM

- I enjoy reading your beautiful and romantic poems, Paloma - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paloma P
Date: 10/6/2016 2:28:00 PM

Kind of you to say Anne-Lise, nice to meet you! :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/6/2016 1:10:00 PM

Very romantic write, Paloma. I wrote a longer version on the same sort of topic entitled "Discretion" If you decide to read.

Paloma P
Date: 10/6/2016 2:27:00 PM

Thanks Daniel, I'll be sure to check it out.

Chris Green

Date: 10/6/2016 11:31:00 AM

I just love this little poem. There is so much love and desire expressed in so few words. Give me a poetic beach of love and I am happy. Mesmerizing Paloma.

Paloma P
Date: 10/6/2016 2:26:00 PM

I'd love a poetic beach of love, thanks Chris! :)