Realizing, Yearning For Lost Youth Had Birthed Poetic Aches

Realizing, Yearning For Lost Youth Had Birthed Poetic Aches

Just past forest green, field of cold and hard stones
there in his youth he oft sat, rejected, sad and alone;
blissful in solitude and mindful of dark world's hurt
poet in deep thought, how best to write and atone.

Creating realms to shatter earth's hardest day
well beyond this world's mass of whirling decay;
in ragged jeans and older brother's torn shirt
searching, searching for life and a better way.

With pen in left hand and an armada of words
scribbling out verses, only to please singing birds;
with heart's pure joy in each word gushing spurt
he deeply scrutinized all his well crafted words.

Years flew by, sanctuary was lost to worldly greed
slowly, ever so slowly he gave way to selfish needs;
his desires, he in prideful arrogance sought to convert
thus raising his own sorrows from lust's thorny seeds.

Racing back, searching for that field lonely dreams
a child again, escaping world's darkest schemes;
found he, truth and joy replaced by life's great hurt
flowing forth in never ending black raging streams.

Then one fine dawn, he remembered that sad, sad place
cold stones that spoke, spoke to him face to face;
regain thy true soul, plant seeds in fresh, fertile dirt
for thy youthful years, no poetic words can replace.

With far greater knowledge, his grief he forsakes
realizing, yearning for youth had birthed poetic aches;
he sat there in new bought jeans and bright shirt
writing new poetic verses, during sweet coffee breaks.

August 2nd, 2017
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For the 'The Poet's Ache' contest - Greg Barden

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/22/2017 10:21:00 AM
Superb flow and mastery Robert, I love the ending! A fave:-) and congrats on your placement in the contest;-)
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Date: 8/11/2017 10:56:00 AM
Very beautiful write Robert, congrats on a fine placement!
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Date: 8/11/2017 6:09:00 AM
Fascinating write. Congrats :) Sunita
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Date: 8/11/2017 4:03:00 AM
This was one of the first that I read, Robert, and it stayed with me ... loved it in every way! Great write, and congrats on SIXTH PLACE!! :-)
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Date: 8/4/2017 4:02:00 AM
I love this amazing poem of yours and how you brought it around to new times, new beginnings, no more yearning for youth's poetic aches. Good luck in the contest Robert. A great write and a fave
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Date: 8/3/2017 3:16:00 PM
Absolutely perfectly crafted. And I too LOVE it! Good luck in the contest my dear friend :) God bless you always...
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Date: 8/2/2017 8:00:00 PM
I Lovvvvvvvvvvvvvve THIS! Nice flow, endearing reminds me of one of my pieces " This is Of My Grandmother" I really like this verse I'm hooked and a new follower : ) remember my motto "there's praise in words and words in praise" blessings James
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Date: 8/2/2017 6:02:00 PM
Gripping poetry. Loved it!
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Date: 8/2/2017 5:46:00 PM
Hi Robert: A beautiful poem in that most poets write in agony and extasy.
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Date: 8/2/2017 4:29:00 PM
This is Excellent! You put a life of a poet into a great poem. I simply love this piece.
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Date: 8/2/2017 4:06:00 PM
A poet's life - to read and re-read.
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Date: 8/2/2017 1:44:00 PM
This is brilliant Robert! "raising his own sorrows from lust's thorny seeds." That is poetry! I wish you well in the contest, this reads like a winner! -- Dean
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Date: 8/2/2017 1:24:00 PM
Well done Robert, circle in circles...
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Date: 8/2/2017 1:10:00 PM
great imagery and insightful thoughts showed here very well Robert. a well-crafted piece!
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Date: 8/2/2017 12:47:00 PM
Nice ;)
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Date: 8/2/2017 10:59:00 AM
You just referred to the wheel of time here, along which we come back to a point we left behind. Things change as perspectives change but the fact is that we carry the older us every time, everywhere. Great idea. :) Regs Sunita
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