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You said you would go the distance I never anticipated it to end so abruptly I could sense your absence executed, so artfully I have to move on and I am doing it prudently

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Date: 11/19/2010 6:42:00 AM
O heavens, you are good, and this is the proof of it.
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Date: 11/14/2010 11:49:00 AM
Terrific Quintain Wilma, it says so much >> James :)
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Date: 11/11/2010 4:39:00 AM
A perfect way to express your feelings, and a moving on poem to the point...sorry about early birhtday wish, thought I saw aomeone wish you it and felt bad I might have missed it...with love Michael
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Date: 11/10/2010 3:52:00 PM
What an eloquent way to put it, Wilma. Well done!
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Date: 11/10/2010 9:33:00 AM
Hello Wilma, That gets right to the point, I love it! Thank you Wilma, and thank you for all your kind words.
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Date: 11/10/2010 8:11:00 AM
So many promises are made when new relationships are formed. If the vows are not kept, you are well advised to "move on...prudently." Very insightful poem, Wilma! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/10/2010 6:34:00 AM
great thoughts on relationsships....
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