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Reality Bites!!!

You said you would go the distance
I never anticipated it to end so abruptly
I could sense your absence
executed, so artfully 
I have to move on and I am doing it prudently

introspectionlifequintain (english)

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L'Nass Shango

November 19, 2010 at 6:42 AM

O heavens, you are good, and this is the proof of it.

James Fraser

November 14, 2010 at 11:49 AM

Terrific Quintain Wilma, it says so much >> James :)

Michael J. Falotico

November 11, 2010 at 4:39 AM

A perfect way to express your feelings, and a moving on poem to the point...sorry about early birhtday wish, thought I saw aomeone wish you it and felt bad I might have missed it...with love Michael

Andrea Dietrich

November 10, 2010 at 3:52 PM

What an eloquent way to put it, Wilma. Well done!

Sharon Ruebel

November 10, 2010 at 9:33 AM

Hello Wilma, That gets right to the point, I love it! Thank you Wilma, and thank you for all your kind words.

Carolyn Devonshire

November 10, 2010 at 8:11 AM

So many promises are made when new relationships are formed. If the vows are not kept, you are well advised to "move on...prudently." Very insightful poem, Wilma! Love, Carolyn