Reality Begins To Blur

I felt sad as I watched her fall apart. Though I wasn't spying I caught her crying and felt a pain growing within my heart. Her tears mesmerize, trickling from her eyes. A weeping Angel; she takes my breath away while I struggle to find the right words to say, as my heart starts to pound. I have never felt this way before now. I knew naught of love or Angels above. Yet, I felt our souls were once linked, somehow; and wondered if she felt the same as me. Both compassion and desire encourage me to inquire as to what the matter might be: as my heart starts to pound. She smiles at me, so I sit for a while. Outside of a dream, not even ice cream could be any sweeter than her sweet smile. She spoke so carefree, as she trusted me. I asked if she felt the attraction I do, and she said yes, she felt a connection too. While we talk, reality begins to blur, as my heart starts to pound; a thumping, throbbing sound.
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Gentry Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 12:12 PM
Congratulations on your win! Well done.
Pinet Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 7:14 PM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
George   Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 2:30 AM
Loved this, Emile. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
Pinet Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 8:13 AM
Thanks Elaine, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 2:13 PM
Back with congrats Emile, I knew this would place well in Greg's contest!
Pinet Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 6:20 PM
Thanks John, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 1:39 PM
Well executed, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 8:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 8:44 PM
I would never attempt such a daunting form like this, this new form of Greg's is a master stroke of genius, you're execution is unbelievable, one day when I get to your level I may try it, this is a winner to me!!
Pinet Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 8:00 AM
Thanks so much John, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 8:16 AM
Emile, you made the form so beautiful and your words are divine !
Pinet Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 8:54 AM
Thanks so much Constance, your support and comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Sands Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 4:43 PM
I enjoyed this Emile! You are a very creative writer with so many nice poems to read :)
Pinet Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 8:53 AM
Thanks Heidi, your comments and support always cheer me up my friend.
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