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Reality

It has to be an obligation to make and create something that allows people to break and shatter things, bone fragments that are real, hospital patients having to be made of steel because there are no real cure in this imperfect world that is every thing but real.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/26/2013 1:45:00 AM
I like this. :)
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Date: 6/14/2013 10:48:00 PM
Khalfani. love reality, real or not..... Stopping by with a sweet smile and a warm Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless.......... Hugs* "SKAT"
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Khalfani Coriano
Date: 6/18/2013 9:05:00 PM
Thank you so much and god bless you too.
Date: 6/14/2013 9:12:00 PM
Hello Khalfani,. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest in the future* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. You are welcomed to look for me anytime you need certain feedback on any given poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love- LOL) * Always * ;-) Linda
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Khalfani Coriano
Date: 6/18/2013 9:09:00 PM
I will definitely consider your contest and thanks so much for inviting me, thanks for the feedback.

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