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Reality

Life seems to carry on Like the inevitability Of waves diminishing sand My mind seems to wander on Like the hummingbird Searching for nectar in winter Neither dead of night Nor haze of early morn Can complete my thoughts Or realize my dreams Still,I will keep the light off The candle burning and exhaling its fragrance For in some simplicity I may find reality With much intrepidness I may find peace Written by Deb Wilson I chose option 4....philosophical...

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Date: 12/18/2014 9:42:00 PM
Very well written. I really enjoyed your poem, Deb!
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Date: 2/9/2014 7:27:00 AM
Wonderful piece of a poem, congrats on the win, deb
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Date: 2/7/2014 7:39:00 PM
Winner List: Impress me III! (Old / New) Sponsored by: Giorgio V. are posted and I will: Congratulate you with your winning poem,Deb !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/22/2010 9:14:00 AM
I am enjoying reading fresh poetry today. What a wonderful thing to do on this rainy day. I am so happy your poetry was among what I have read and enjoyed today Debra. Love, Carol
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