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Reality

You gave me an inch , but I road you a mile come lick the lips of my evil smile. I taste your flesh I'm in your mind, Your back it cracks, hips they grind. I feel you pull away from me, you may get loose, but your not free, your a white hot fire that comes, consuming me. I touched you now I'm like a cold summer chill, on a hot winter night I get my fill. The desire for you, your flesh on me, I'll make you feel my, reality. james stevenson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/27/2008 9:54:00 AM
James - Congratulations on your feature this week! Wishing you a Happy & Healthy New Year. Peace always, John
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Date: 12/26/2008 5:12:00 PM
This violent write is provocative and powerful. Congratulations, James on your writing be a feature this week at PoetrySoup.
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Date: 12/23/2008 5:29:00 PM
Congrats James on your lyric "Reality" being featured. Vince
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Date: 12/22/2008 9:07:00 PM
Nice work James, Congrats on being featured this week, Happy Holidays...Raul
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Date: 12/21/2008 10:21:00 PM
James - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/21/2008 5:19:00 PM
Congrats on being featured.
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Date: 12/21/2008 3:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Warmest wishes for a beautiful holiday! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/13/2008 5:25:00 PM
Your very deep.. *Breana*
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