Real Life Rescue

Yesterday, while walking home,
I saw some people who
Were gazing past the river rail,
But why? I had no clue.

Two cops were there as well and so
I looked to where they leaned
And saw the body of a man;
That’s why they’d intervened.

More people gathered and I learned
That he was still alive.
He’d either jumped or fallen;
No one knew if he’d survive.

Within mere minutes, boats arrived,
The rescue underway,
The efforts of our civil servants
Proudly on display.

They carried him onto a boat
Then to a nearby dock
Where an ambulance was waiting
For the stretcher down the block.

Up close, I saw he wasn’t young
And injured on his head.
I never learned if he pulled through
Or passed away instead.

It felt like watching as they filmed
A TV cop show, but
The victim, sadly, didn’t move
And no one shouted, “Cut!”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Slaughter Avatar
November 16, 2024 at 10:29 AM
Wow! Now that's an experience I wouldn't care to have. I certainly do agree with Terry's comment, though, Ilene, and I also hope that you and your family are keeping safe from all the fire activity in NYC that I see on the news lately.
Flood Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 5:14 PM
You’re a very caring person, Ilene. Some people would see that as ‘something that happened today’ while you wonder what became of him. I guess you’ll never know, but you will know that you cared. I think many of us are with you because, believe it or not… life is not PlayStation. Nice write. ‘Enjoyed’ is probably not the right word but you get my drift.
Canerdy Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 4:41 AM
Ilene, this is an excellent narrative poem~~well told and very effective, especially the last stanza. Janice
Andresen Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 1:56 AM
- The reality of a completely normal everyday life... it sticks to the retina... and thoughts become chaos... - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 10:05 PM
Hope he survived Ilene, you just don't know what you'll see when you go out for the day. Tom
Rolland Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 7:18 PM
so sad story, as we say in french b: "la vie c'est pas du cinéma" thanks poet ilene
M  Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 4:08 PM
Wow you certainly have a lot going on in your neighbourhood Ilene! Not a nice situation....hope he fell and hope he survived! Debx
Jones Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 3:19 PM
You did a great job of explaining the urgency of the situation Al while flawlessly rhyming! Great job!
Allison Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 2:49 PM
it must be so sad to witness this Ilene - made me think of a guy who went missing here on Friday, his body was washed up at the harbour today:=( hugs Jan xx
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