Real Fireworks

The fourth of July
Told my wife her meatloaf sucked
Then I saw fireworks
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Henderson Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 7:34 AM
Larry, you did it again boy. Good one. Charles
Blakeley Avatar
July 1, 2010 at 7:06 PM
Ha Ha !! Too funny..How long have you been married, five minutes ? ..ha ha Looks like you are learning, the hard way.
Gorelick Avatar
July 1, 2010 at 3:25 PM
I wasnt going to log in until later but when i saw this I just had to comment. You are hysterical Larry B...I am going to share this with my 4th of July family...BG
Taylor Avatar
July 1, 2010 at 10:55 AM
Open mouth - insert foot! Real laffer (except for your wife). Ralph
Trusty Avatar
July 1, 2010 at 9:41 AM
You are a brave man Larry, reminds me of a co-worker who when pressed to tell what he bought his wife for Christmas said in front of ten women. "I BOUGHT HER A STOVE THAT FLUSHES" All the best, JT
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