Real Cereal -Trix

**REAL CEREAL TRIX**

This girl  Rio's, packed lunch in a cereal bowl

Her language almost sounds like espanol

Adding chocolate chunks to her munch

Funny how she ate, cinnamon toast crunch 

The real TRIX is to add corn, in anything, NIKKO!


hahha kidding!


dedicated to RIO~aka NIKKO
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 1:28 PM
I agree w/Paul and Ska. Cool funny, PD. Your humor chops are working just fine. Good limerick. I can just taste those sweet multi-colored nuggets, you silly wabbit. Ha ha ha. Keep on laughing and living, sharing and giving. Much love to you.
A  Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 10:47 PM
let's talk about spam lol
Callus Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 11:32 AM
I love cereals, Linda! I have it every morning ... fruit and fibre, etc. Never tasted Trix, though! ~ hugs // paul
Davis Avatar
September 25, 2013 at 8:08 AM
Don't know who Nikko is, but sure this put a smile on her face. humorous and creative. nice job
Kelly Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 5:32 AM
Snap ; Crakle & Pop , will never be the same PD . Clever piece , PD and tks for your kind words .
Brown Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 12:38 PM
Thank you for your kind words on my poetry. It is always a pleasure to read your writings P.D....... Love, Carol
Pettit Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 11:08 PM
Do you sometimes wonder what is really in those cereals? Good limerick.
Johnson Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 1:04 AM
gotta have me weetbix an nutrigain fix, bout daylight yet again, thank you for my win i remain, grateful for my fix....thanks mate...
Mister Roboto Avatar
November 4, 2011 at 3:03 PM
cool flow straight from the cereal bowl. We'll mark it down as a :"Cereal Killuh Poem"!
Johnson Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 10:08 AM
Mix em' up any way you likey. Life is good with anything, just ask Mikey.
Mcknight Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 8:36 PM
hey the heartland of american, I'm just a country girl where we still have all that back there, cereal companies, etc. and Yes, my highschool was in the middle of a corn field believe it or not.I enjoyed the personal touch and expression of real life in your poem. Always good to read you, re:Journey/ Lucinda "Cindy" Lu Cayton
Sweetheart Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 11:40 AM
cute tribute to sweetie friend Nikko PD my BFF.. my sons when little loved trix..but I think it was that goofy rabbit.. sorry for late return to u ..we are so overwhelmed with moving and paperwork and buying things for the new home and now work is very busy for holiday season has begun.. can u believe it? always enjoy everything about u luv.. and know I miss being on PS.. as much as I used to but right now ..not possible.. your BFF..
Ball Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 10:23 AM
This is too cute my friend.Loved it. I know Nikko loved it too. It gave me a smile this morn. God Bless, JB
Fraser Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 9:19 AM
So many tasty Limericks being tabled for this contest that it's making me so hungry. Have a lovely Sunday pd :)
Wesley Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 7:38 PM
Nikko keeps changing her name eh! Fun verse for her to swallow.
Song Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 10:14 AM
Nikko should be honored that you thought enough of her to write a limerick about her breakfast time! This makes me hungry for a big bowl of Trix! SILLY WABBIT, TRIX ARE FOR KIDZ!!!!! Love, Gwendolen
Devnath  Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 12:21 PM
Rightly penned. Enjoyed your write, my sense tells NIKKO. Ha ha....bl
Kearley Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 2:32 PM
Ha,ha...Good one! Thanks for the complements for my poems and contests. :-) Good luck in all you write.
K. Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 1:57 PM
Thank you so much pd for writing this :) this really tickled me haha! I think even the Trix rabbit would be smiling at this (well that's what I think!) -- didn't you know, almost everything has CORN syrup in it, so that isn't too far from the truth, lol --Riko, oh wait-- Rio, umm I mean Nikko :D see I don't know my real name anymore....O_o heehee I am adding this to my faves lol
A   Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 12:17 PM
this is one bad example... lol.. now that i read it twice.... hope you don't mind me using your name..nikko,.... i mean rio.. sweet,...p.d.
K. Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 1:58 PM
well I still love it ^_^ and nope I definitely don't mind you using my name :D
M V Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 11:34 AM
Funny dedication,PD!Though I am from a different culture,I could enjoy your humor to some extent.I don't know how to thank you for your nice comments on my poem.I am very happy.Hope you read my poem,'Return Journey............and will respond to the note at the bottom.Luv FAB
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