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Reaching Out

Through thickening haze, I hear your voice call my name, encouraging me, words beating with my heart, guiding me home as I stumble and crawl… lost in a winding maze, blinded by a smokescreen haze. My life falls off-course; a sudden struggle, I am suffocated by my own thoughts, by perfectly manicured hedges, by a world of betrayal…a world of deceit. Yet, I live every moment with hope – I see filtered rays of light, feel their warmth on my skin, a reminder of Heaven when I shiver within. As I climb my leafy-green, prison walls, my courage creates new heightened paths. Like English Ivy weaving through a garden lattice, I grow taller, plan my escape, hear your unwavering voice drape over me with love and strength… Your hand, outstretched, seems just within my reach. I focus on a life without walls, a place I can learn and teach, an open field of tomorrows… vibrant, full, free. Every singular cell, every breath I draw, every soulful feeling…all of me, with all of my flaws, reaches out to all of you. With a touch, I am saved… I am found. A new dawn breaks just within my reach.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/25/2015 11:41:00 PM
Rhonda, Congratulations in John Lawless "Just Within Reach" contest. Always ~ LINDA ~
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Date: 4/24/2015 4:38:00 PM
Stunning! I love that it ends with the fulfillment of hope.
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Date: 4/23/2015 11:36:00 AM
Congratulations Rhonda on your well deserved win!
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Date: 4/23/2015 9:32:00 AM
inspiring uplifting beautiful and just wow.. :)!!//olive eloisa
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Date: 4/22/2015 1:04:00 AM
I feel your relief Rhonda...Peter
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Date: 4/22/2015 12:06:00 AM
What a beautifully expressed poem about struggle and growth in life!
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Date: 4/21/2015 10:22:00 PM
"With a touch, I am saved..." I love this! Congrats!
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Date: 4/21/2015 7:13:00 PM
Beautifully written, Rhonda; I have read it twice and will probably read it again. Your leafy prison just keeps opening up to me. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/21/2015 2:40:00 PM
Loved the metaphor of the smokescreen. Congrad's on your verse winning. Light & Love
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Date: 4/21/2015 11:13:00 AM
So many metaphors brilliantly written......a prison of leafy green is so apparently filled of despair and isolation! Well done, Rhonda!
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Date: 4/21/2015 10:10:00 AM
Rhonda, the line "I am suffocated by my own thoughts". The speed bump that slowed me to read more intently the following lines. Great Job. Thanks for participating in the contest
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Date: 4/21/2015 9:44:00 AM
Hi Rhonda, stopping back to offer my heartfelt congratulations to your for your 2nd Place win for this awesome poem! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/15/2015 7:49:00 PM
This entry for John's contest is not only amazing but unique and very creative. Where are all the favs? An excellent write!
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Date: 4/15/2015 1:41:00 PM
Dear Rhonda, I feel like I'm standing next to you in this maze of deceit where you feel "suffocated" by your own thoughts. How nice that you found your way to someone who "saves" you from this type of mental prison. Love works wonders, doesn't it? Sending winning wishes to you for John's contest. I think this is the finest entry I've seen so far. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/14/2015 5:11:00 PM
So beautifully inspiring, Rhonda. "A new dawn breaks just within my reach." These are words we all need to repeat each day as our pledge of hope. If this is for the contest, I offer my best wishes! 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/14/2015 2:47:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work today..I feel this one is expressing some very deep feelings..Thank you for your visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 4/13/2015 4:48:00 PM
A wonderful write of hope and new beginnings. Excellently worded. Hugs
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Date: 4/13/2015 12:08:00 PM
I have read this through twice Rhonda - there are so many layers to this inspirational write - so full of hope - am making it a fave do i can delve into it again:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 4/13/2015 11:41:00 AM
The imagery that is presented carries the essence of the statement the author is making and it is a powerful one. Emile. #7
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Date: 4/13/2015 7:43:00 AM
Rhonda, such an entrancing and exceptional free verse, each word and line magical, well done 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, my girl and me
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Date: 4/12/2015 11:34:00 PM
'An open field of tomorrows'- lovely phrase, rich in hope and optimism. All in all, a lovely poem, full of hope, and very refreshing. Feel better for reading it. Great work, Rhonda. Viv x
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 4/12/2015 11:50:00 PM
Thanks for being the first (and only person...LOL) to comment on my poem tonight, Viv. I appreciate all your visits and kind comments. Hugs, Rhonda

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