Re-Birth

Re-Birth Slow flowers explode sudden flushes Waking days already warming rooted wintered bulbs Hibernated yawnings burst from trees

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Nivitha Ann Paul

Date: 4/3/2009 10:40:00 AM

nice one.....

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/25/2009 12:43:00 PM

Oh, Colin, I think we are all longing for spring right now. The colorful azaleas are just starting to bloom in North Florida, and my hometown celebrates each year with a "Springtime Tallahassee" festival. Indeed the sun is warming "wintered bulbs" as nature works her magic. Beautiful poem! Love, Carolyn

Arany P.

Date: 2/21/2009 5:21:00 AM

wonderful haiku, Colin... lovely the image!! ~ Arany

Christopher Higgins

Date: 2/20/2009 5:01:00 PM

Hibernated yawnings?..spectacular visual my brother.. this is a wonderful Haiku..great write.

Laurie Ginn

Date: 2/18/2009 3:47:00 PM

So very soon I will start going through my yard looking expectantly for baby sprouts emerging from their slumber, IT MAKES ME SOOO DARNED EXCITED!