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Ravishing Rosie

Ravishing Rosie Redbud raced red roadsters rapidly down the roadside.
Racing recklessly, Rosie Redbud rammed Roger Reynold's red ranger, 
resulting in ruined wrecks and a raving, ranting Roger.








Ravishing Rosie wreaked havoc with tongues.
For Gwen's Tongue Twister contest

Copyright © Kim Merryman | Year Posted 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/31/2011 11:46:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Gwendolen's "Big Kid Tongue Twister" contest Kim. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 10/30/2011 10:32:00 AM Cool! congrats on your big win. BG Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/30/2011 7:38:00 AM Enjoyed reading your creative Alliteration..Congrats.Sara Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 10/29/2011 7:49:00 PM Haaaaaaaaa! a cool idea Kim Congratulations on your win. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Margaret Foster Date: 10/29/2011 7:46:00 PM I'm sure he forgave her when he saw how ravishing she was...or then again, maybe not.....congrats Kim Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 10/29/2011 11:02:00 AM Congrats Kim on a fantastic win with this tongue twister luv... Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 10/29/2011 7:51:00 AM Ravishing Rosie was raving, ranted my husband Roger!! He thot u wrote this one for HIM> I said NO SUCH LUCK!! ha ha. A wonderful alliteration, Kim. Fun image of the red Ranger and it was realistic which was what I liked the most. Thanks for supporting my contest...appreciate your investment of time in writing something so spectacular! Love, Gwendolen Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 10/29/2011 7:39:00 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of Gwen, Kim Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/21/2011 8:22:00 AM good morning~K.M. ~ how are you this wonderful Friday :-) morning??. As for me, I'm missing everyone I know here on the soup PLUS more..((glad they are back)).Stopping by to read a couple of poems, after being shut out for them awful few days..ENJOYED YOUR POEM, thank you for sharing! Take care and have yourself a wonderful Friday~ ;- Login to Reply

Broken Butterfly Date: 10/21/2011 8:17:00 AM This really is a tongue twister. May I add you as a fav poet? Login to Reply

Black Eyed Susan Date: 10/7/2011 7:13:00 PM ha! this is funny and so cute. a great entry for the contest - good luck :) Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 10/7/2011 2:38:00 PM Nice job Kim, Gwen surely will like this one.The best to you. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/6/2011 5:26:00 PM GOOD entry. I really like this one! Login to Reply

Tony Lane Date: 10/6/2011 12:57:00 PM Really a riot. Tony Login to Reply