Ravishing Rosie

Ravishing Rosie Redbud raced red roadsters rapidly down the roadside.
Racing recklessly, Rosie Redbud rammed Roger Reynold's red ranger, 
resulting in ruined wrecks and a raving, ranting Roger.








Ravishing Rosie wreaked havoc with tongues.
For Gwen's Tongue Twister contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 11:46 AM
Congratulations on your win in Gwendolen's "Big Kid Tongue Twister" contest Kim. Love, Carol
Gorelick Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 10:32 AM
Cool! congrats on your big win. BG
Kendrick Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 7:38 AM
Enjoyed reading your creative Alliteration..Congrats.Sara
Freeman Avatar
October 29, 2011 at 7:49 PM
Haaaaaaaaa! a cool idea Kim Congratulations on your win. Agape, Moses
Foster Avatar
October 29, 2011 at 7:46 PM
I'm sure he forgave her when he saw how ravishing she was...or then again, maybe not.....congrats Kim
Sweetheart Avatar
October 29, 2011 at 11:02 AM
Congrats Kim on a fantastic win with this tongue twister luv...
Song Avatar
October 29, 2011 at 7:51 AM
Ravishing Rosie was raving, ranted my husband Roger!! He thot u wrote this one for HIM> I said NO SUCH LUCK!! ha ha. A wonderful alliteration, Kim. Fun image of the red Ranger and it was realistic which was what I liked the most. Thanks for supporting my contest...appreciate your investment of time in writing something so spectacular! Love, Gwendolen
Mehta Avatar
October 29, 2011 at 7:39 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Gwen, Kim
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October 21, 2011 at 8:22 AM
good morning~K.M. ~ how are you this wonderful Friday :-) morning??. As for me, I'm missing everyone I know here on the soup PLUS more..((glad they are back)).Stopping by to read a couple of poems, after being shut out for them awful few days..ENJOYED YOUR POEM, thank you for sharing! Take care and have yourself a wonderful Friday~ ;-
Butterfly Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 8:17 AM
This really is a tongue twister. May I add you as a fav poet?
Susan Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 7:13 PM
ha! this is funny and so cute. a great entry for the contest - good luck :)
Freeman Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 2:38 PM
Nice job Kim, Gwen surely will like this one.The best to you. Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 5:26 PM
GOOD entry. I really like this one!
Lane Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 12:57 PM
Really a riot. Tony
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