Raven's Plight

Raven was Death. She dwelt in death. She lived on death. Ages past, she had worn 
the blue-black, purple, feathers of the raven and dined on royalty at Tower hill. A 
tumble from grace had lodged her here in this fragile form. No more would her maw 
drip ruby red, no more would her caw fill the mourning, or her soaring flight slice 
the air like a Frenchman’s sword. A Raven, with clipped wings, was she.

Centuries had passed since she, in her feathered form, had feasted on the King.
**Bran the Blessed, giant, King of Wales, had been her down fall. Cursed was she,
as she dined on his eyes, in the field of battle. Ah, what did a raven know 
of the curses of man.  But, she knew now. Bran's head was placed,
as a talisman, on the grounds of Tower Keep in Londontown. She, 
transformed, cursed, walks the night in this beautiful, weak, human vessel for
as long as, Bran's name is remembered.

Her satin-sandaled feet hold her earthbound. Just as superstition 
holds her clip-winged brethren in the Tower courtyard, Bran's Curse holds her here. 
No longer can she fly, but, she is free to roam. The churchyard calls her. Ashen skies no longer welcome her, but the gravestones, spade-shaped like the tails of carrion feeder, beckon. The evening corpse has arrived. Draped in mourning weeds of black, her death-like pall, luminescent in the moonlight, her lips a tell-tale crimson, she arms her self with a firebrand. The bluish steel glistens. Death with a gun, certainly, one could see the 
over kill? She laughs. Looking skyward, she calls. “Husband*, children…” 
she mimicks the caw of her unfettered kin. “Come to Ma Ma..dinner is served.”  

*Raven's mate for life...or death? ;)
**Bran is the Welsh word for Raven/ King Bran the Blessed

***A NIGHTMARE
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 10:19 AM
Yes, I remember this one, Debs. Congratulations in the dream contest!
Falotico Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 7:52 AM
Congrats on your win in th Dream a little dream contest!!!! Excellent work Debbie.. xoox Michael
Guzzi Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 6:08 AM
sorry about the formating it doesn't want to post correctly
Brown Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 5:58 AM
Congratulations on your great win in Tracie's "Dream" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Edwards Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 12:38 AM
I really enjoyed this Debbie luv, congrats on your 8th place win in my contest xx
Quigley Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 10:34 PM
A great journey was had. Greatly enjoyed Debbie. Congratulations
Weaver Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 6:06 AM
^.^ I like this one too. you have such an amazing talent for this... I'm kind of jealous. :)
Nutter Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 3:03 AM
Such an excellent piece with so many wonderful lines and metaphors one cannot choose a favorite. Reads like the beginning of a wonderful novel you really should expand.
Goff Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 8:33 PM
"TRANCE-INDUCING" this epic is....
Goff Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 8:32 PM
"Draped in mourning weeds of black, her death-like pall" HOLY COW HALSEY HALL!!!!
Goff Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 8:28 PM
gawd I love yer "Celtic Writes!" could listen to them all day....
Goff Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 8:26 PM
my ancestors from the "Celtic Moons" breathed life into my blood....my dna was birthed there....and I shall return to where William Goffe was banished, I know these dark places, and once more will find light where only darkness beckons....jmg
Goff Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 8:18 PM
when hiking the backwoods of Northern Minnesota....8" "Caranauga-Steel' blade on my hip...I'm truly free....there amongst the towering pines I come across brother Raven....the only animal I have encountered, feather or fur...(well, I should include the 3-legged Wolf" I encountered) that felt my equal in intelligence and cunning (gosh! why do I talk like this?) Deb, this poem is beyond good....every line I MUST mine the depths....faved it......jimbo
Beck Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 11:01 AM
yes a close parallel with the Twa Corbies, a Scottish folk song I love, along with many other folk songs from Britain( by the way there is a TRIMDON GRANGE collection of songs too)...especially liked the " slice /air /Frenchman /sword " image...... and "mourning weeds"...and the sheer bloodthirsty feel to it...very spooky ! good luck in this contest Deb
Henderson Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 3:53 PM
This poem: very clear and succinctly dark. Very well laid out and I enjoyed it much. Had to read several times, so much in it, but tied together very well, with definitive climax. Good write Deb, Luv Chas
Inka Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 10:39 AM
Iv heard that the raven is amongst the most intelligent in the animal kingdom, And you've made me believe that with this intelligence comes the ability/curse to comprehend the human condition.
Wilson Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 10:32 AM
Very eerie and macabre even! Ravens plight is well depicted..Constance will love this ..good luck Deb..love,Deb
Mehta Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 7:33 AM
Soup Mail!!!
Dietrich Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 6:52 AM
Good new title, Deb, and I am wondering if she will be able to transform back to a crow if she is so cursed! YOu need a part two now! LUv, Andrea
A   Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 7:56 PM
yes you do... please tell why?,..p.d.
Pettit Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 7:55 PM
It reads as if you are describing a blind date I once had a few years ago. Your work is very descriptive.
Walters Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 6:35 PM
Wow, this is great! Love the imagery you have used- quite haunting! best of wishes to you, hugs, Kris
A   Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 5:52 PM
Super D.G., i'm sure this will strike Constance' fancy deep desire in poetry.. She loves awesome poems like this.. Harsh & creative.. the best of luck,..p.d.
Onclaud Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 12:12 PM
a sizzling combo of surrealistic and abstract visuals.. i am stunned... in a nice way.. go hit the charts, lights!! SOUP MAIL..:) huggs, nette
Dietrich Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 9:08 AM
WOWIE, highest rating for this very unique imaginative piece, Debbie. I just love this story! Luv, Andrea
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