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Raven's Plight

Raven was Death. She dwelt in death. She lived on death. Ages past, she had worn the blue-black, purple, feathers of the raven and dined on royalty at Tower hill. A tumble from grace had lodged her here in this fragile form. No more would her maw drip ruby red, no more would her caw fill the mourning, or her soaring flight slice the air like a Frenchman’s sword. A Raven, with clipped wings, was she. Centuries had passed since she, in her feathered form, had feasted on the King. **Bran the Blessed, giant, King of Wales, had been her down fall. Cursed was she, as she dined on his eyes, in the field of battle. Ah, what did a raven know of the curses of man. But, she knew now. Bran's head was placed, as a talisman, on the grounds of Tower Keep in Londontown. She, transformed, cursed, walks the night in this beautiful, weak, human vessel for as long as, Bran's name is remembered. Her satin-sandaled feet hold her earthbound. Just as superstition holds her clip-winged brethren in the Tower courtyard, Bran's Curse holds her here. No longer can she fly, but, she is free to roam. The churchyard calls her. Ashen skies no longer welcome her, but the gravestones, spade-shaped like the tails of carrion feeder, beckon. The evening corpse has arrived. Draped in mourning weeds of black, her death-like pall, luminescent in the moonlight, her lips a tell-tale crimson, she arms her self with a firebrand. The bluish steel glistens. Death with a gun, certainly, one could see the over kill? She laughs. Looking skyward, she calls. “Husband*, children…” she mimicks the caw of her unfettered kin. “Come to Ma Ma..dinner is served.” *Raven's mate for life...or death? ;) **Bran is the Welsh word for Raven/ King Bran the Blessed ***A NIGHTMARE

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Date: 12/9/2011 10:19:00 AM
Yes, I remember this one, Debs. Congratulations in the dream contest!
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Date: 12/9/2011 7:52:00 AM
Congrats on your win in th Dream a little dream contest!!!! Excellent work Debbie.. xoox Michael
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Date: 12/9/2011 6:08:00 AM
sorry about the formating it doesn't want to post correctly
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Date: 12/9/2011 5:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win in Tracie's "Dream" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/9/2011 12:38:00 AM
I really enjoyed this Debbie luv, congrats on your 8th place win in my contest xx
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Date: 12/8/2011 10:34:00 PM
A great journey was had. Greatly enjoyed Debbie. Congratulations
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Date: 2/2/2011 6:06:00 AM
^.^ I like this one too. you have such an amazing talent for this... I'm kind of jealous. :)
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Date: 2/1/2011 3:03:00 AM
Such an excellent piece with so many wonderful lines and metaphors one cannot choose a favorite. Reads like the beginning of a wonderful novel you really should expand.
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Date: 1/31/2011 8:33:00 PM
"TRANCE-INDUCING" this epic is....
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Date: 1/31/2011 8:32:00 PM
"Draped in mourning weeds of black, her death-like pall" HOLY COW HALSEY HALL!!!!
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Date: 1/31/2011 8:28:00 PM
gawd I love yer "Celtic Writes!" could listen to them all day....
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Date: 1/31/2011 8:26:00 PM
my ancestors from the "Celtic Moons" breathed life into my blood....my dna was birthed there....and I shall return to where William Goffe was banished, I know these dark places, and once more will find light where only darkness beckons....jmg
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Date: 1/31/2011 8:18:00 PM
when hiking the backwoods of Northern Minnesota....8" "Caranauga-Steel' blade on my hip...I'm truly free....there amongst the towering pines I come across brother Raven....the only animal I have encountered, feather or fur...(well, I should include the 3-legged Wolf" I encountered) that felt my equal in intelligence and cunning (gosh! why do I talk like this?) Deb, this poem is beyond good....every line I MUST mine the depths....faved it......jimbo
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Date: 1/31/2011 11:01:00 AM
yes a close parallel with the Twa Corbies, a Scottish folk song I love, along with many other folk songs from Britain( by the way there is a TRIMDON GRANGE collection of songs too)...especially liked the " slice /air /Frenchman /sword " image...... and "mourning weeds"...and the sheer bloodthirsty feel to it...very spooky ! good luck in this contest Deb
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Date: 1/28/2011 3:53:00 PM
This poem: very clear and succinctly dark. Very well laid out and I enjoyed it much. Had to read several times, so much in it, but tied together very well, with definitive climax. Good write Deb, Luv Chas
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Date: 1/28/2011 10:39:00 AM
Iv heard that the raven is amongst the most intelligent in the animal kingdom, And you've made me believe that with this intelligence comes the ability/curse to comprehend the human condition.
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Date: 1/28/2011 10:32:00 AM
Very eerie and macabre even! Ravens plight is well depicted..Constance will love this ..good luck Deb..love,Deb
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Date: 1/25/2011 7:33:00 AM
Soup Mail!!!
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Date: 1/25/2011 6:52:00 AM
Good new title, Deb, and I am wondering if she will be able to transform back to a crow if she is so cursed! YOu need a part two now! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/23/2011 7:56:00 PM
yes you do... please tell why?,..p.d.
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Date: 1/23/2011 7:55:00 PM
It reads as if you are describing a blind date I once had a few years ago. Your work is very descriptive.
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Date: 1/23/2011 6:35:00 PM
Wow, this is great! Love the imagery you have used- quite haunting! best of wishes to you, hugs, Kris
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Date: 1/23/2011 5:52:00 PM
Super D.G., i'm sure this will strike Constance' fancy deep desire in poetry.. She loves awesome poems like this.. Harsh & creative.. the best of luck,..p.d.
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Date: 1/23/2011 12:12:00 PM
a sizzling combo of surrealistic and abstract visuals.. i am stunned... in a nice way.. go hit the charts, lights!! SOUP MAIL..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 1/23/2011 9:08:00 AM
WOWIE, highest rating for this very unique imaginative piece, Debbie. I just love this story! Luv, Andrea
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