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Raven's Place of Nowhere

*I entered this Poem in ~Constance~A Rambling Poet's Contest "Among The Dead" I write from this place of nowhere This darkened haunt of deep despair Even a Raven's darkened shade is brighter Than the mood that has set upon this lair... There are no words to cheer me. I look to find a glimmer... An enlightened shadow of what once was me But alas that ghost eludes and finds me not Preferring a labyrinth of happiness, its maze To the life's webs that now encase me. I cannot scale these vertical walls This darkened fortress that surrounds me And so I dive to ever deeper depths In this ocean of sadness that seeks to drown me. No tears can fall from drought-filled eyes Desert rain has not come bidden Blood cannot spill from pain-filled thoughts No apparent wounds to need not be hidden. A creek of fear and anguish Feeds into my river of lonely despair These tides serve to further drown me In heavier waters with no apparent air. These words are all I have left within me To feed what's left of this withered shell I have been exiled to this lonely oasis My last hope for water in this, my empty well. (January 23, 2011 Wausau, Wisconsin) (c) Copyright 2011 by Christine A Kysely, All Rights Reserved

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Date: 1/24/2011 2:23:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Date: 1/23/2011 11:11:00 PM
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Date: 1/23/2011 11:10:00 PM
Hey, is this for the contest with that Raven picture? It has the "sense" of that contest, dark and despairing. Nicely done! I have been trying to return your soupmail but the system won't let me. So I have copied my message and will try to paste it into a new soupmail to you. If you do not get it from me,it means someting is wrong with your soupmail and you must send a note to poetrysoup (see Contact us at bottom of their home page) Here I go now. I hope you get my mail!
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Date: 1/23/2011 9:17:00 PM
You have nice wording and rhyming in this offering.
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