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Raven Stares

Lover One Raven feathers fall Darkness gleams in thick forest Silent is the squall Lover Two May the stare stay locked Tearing fingers ache in skin Legs could not hold fear Why was the past so full then Now how can I fill this heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 5/5/2011 11:20:00 PM
I like this. Can't quite put a finger on what snags my attention....the line Tearing fingers ache....i dig. Nice job.
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Date: 3/10/2011 7:28:00 AM
Quite the stated moments here. Very intense, a little sad, but the lines crave for redemption. Least that's what I noticed. Great job!
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