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Always together; Eternally Apart Raven and the Wolf A raven beauty lurks in an endless banquet of shifting, ashen foggy moonlit night. Burst of stimulating woven blanket; lovers sail onto the last laced breath flight. Rhythmic chants echo veiled in sound and light. The black ominous raven flies by day. Her lover, white wolf, walks by shadowed night under the drunken moon; two lovers lay. Stolen moment of time, hunger in delight. The howl's that calls of invite at twilight. Always joined; forever apart" to roam, carrying their souls through eternity. Their pleas ignored, for freedom in their home; denied an earthly life of divinity and their love stretched into infinity. 8/11/2018 Ladyhawke is a 1985 American fantasy film directed by Richard Donner and starring Matthew Broderick, Rutger Hauer, and Michelle Pfeiffer. "Always together; eternally apart". By day Isabeau becomes a hawk, and by night Navarre becomes a wolf. Neither has any memory of their half-life in animal form. Only at dusk and dawn of each day can they see each other in human form for one fleeting moment, but they can never touch. I've use a Raven instead of a Hawk.

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Date: 8/14/2018 7:46:00 AM
Great story, but so incredibly sad - I see congrats are in order!
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Date: 8/12/2018 7:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Date: 8/12/2018 8:13:00 AM
This is great, Eve! A wonderful story and such a joy to read...Congrats on your win! Charlie
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Date: 8/11/2018 10:39:00 PM
Wow! This is awesome, Eve. Such an ingenious story, encased in vivid imagery. Congratulations to you on your win in the contest! ~ Gershon
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Date: 8/11/2018 9:56:00 PM
Eve, a captivating story and an obvious winner.. many congrats!
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Date: 8/11/2018 9:11:00 PM
Lovely, Eve. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 8/11/2018 6:09:00 PM
Congrats. Sara
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/11/2018 6:31:00 PM
Thank you, Sara :) Hugs Eve
Date: 8/11/2018 6:43:00 AM
I sure got into this poem, my attention was held throughout and it was totally a joy to spend time with each line. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/11/2018 6:31:00 PM
Thank you, CayCay:) Hugs Eve
Date: 8/11/2018 4:01:00 AM
Is late so I will come back and read again, but this is so nice eve!!!
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Date: 8/11/2018 1:38:00 AM
Well written verse Eve, I must admit I have not seen that film. Tom
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/11/2018 6:30:00 PM
Thank you, Tom :) Hugs Eve

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