Ravaging Destruction

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The hurricane hit in the middle of the night,
      originating in the Caribbean Sea just a tropical storm;
but by the time it hit land it was a category five,
            it brought groans of howling wind and rain.

It lay waste and devastation in its path,
      destroying cities and towns without mercy;
buildings, homes and forests lay in ruin and havoc,
            people rushed to shelters leaving all they loved.

A war of elements, a tempest wild, and violent,
      such strong winds no one can recall ever;
and the rain, and rain, the flooding, destruction,
            people and animals drowned in whirling water.

And we are told of the pillage and plunder of homes
      by men with no moral compass, oh sadness;
and there are other hurricanes on the way,
           a home destroyed with only steps for refuge.

A family clings praying for rescue . . . .
             

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September 9, 2017

Verse/Ravaging Destruction
Copyright Protected, ID 938427


Hurricanes
Julie Rodeheaver  

Second Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/24/2017 3:29:00 AM
perfectly penned on such a topical theme Constance, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/13/2017 8:52:00 PM
Storms are so unpredictable, Broken Wings, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Date: 9/12/2017 11:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, BR.
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Date: 9/12/2017 2:56:00 PM
Back for congrats!
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Date: 9/12/2017 9:37:00 AM
Congratulations Broken Wings :)
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Date: 9/12/2017 9:06:00 AM
Excellent description of nature at its most destructive, Constance. Congrats on your win! Janice
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Date: 9/11/2017 10:15:00 AM
Your work is always magic. Nicely done x
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Date: 9/9/2017 9:01:00 PM
So sad the storm and how devastating when people take advantage!
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Date: 9/9/2017 11:42:00 AM
This is such a sad but true write my friend! There is such destruction with hurricanes and the aftereffects is devastating! I truly loved reading this wondrous poem this afternoon! What an amazing piece, Great Work!!
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