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Ravaged Spirit

In my life there has been disappointment, oh, so often I have felt discouraged; the failures and let downs, I keep silent, full of sadness- my spirit ravaged. My enchantment with the pen in ruin, I have hung my head weeping in defeat; the Muse in me dead, hidden and frozen, I have felt a poet quite obsolete. But, in my heart is a hidden treasure, and in my head words keep swirling- twirling; oh, in my mind there is a loud chatter, I lift my pen and words come falling. I use disappointment to write poems, take real life and make poetic gems. _____________________ October 5, 2017 Sonnet/Ravaged Spirit Copyright Protected, ID 947318 Written for the contest, Taking Disappointment in your life turning it into something positive sponsor, Brenda Chiri Second Place
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Ashley Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 8:43 PM
Returning to extend my congratulations on your win Broken Wings with this beautifully bittersweet write!
Roper Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 10:30 PM
Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings, you do make gems... lovely ones. Hugs Eve ~`*
Schiavina Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 9:29 AM
Congratulation! Beautiful poem with deep meaning. Well deserved win.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 2:21 AM
Congratulations, BW on your win. A poetic gem indeed.
Barden Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 1:15 AM
Gorgeous Sonnet, Broken Wings - - Blessings and sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win ... keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
Gauthier Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 11:34 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Gentile Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 1:01 PM
This is beautiful, Broken Wings, and so very relatable!
Sivey Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 8:57 AM
This write is a poetic gem in itself my friend! I am impressed with your enchantment by your glorious words of wisdom from experience of disappointments and pain that you've experienced, I have found them too in my past! They do make for some serious poems, ones of darkness and gloom! I really enjoyed this delightful piece this morning! Great Work!!
Ashley Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 7:20 PM
A beautifully written poem Broken Wings. Heartfelt and an intimate bittersweet portrait of the poet. Well done and enjoyed. Good luck int he contest!
Pandit Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 7:10 PM
This is a poetic gem..well done BW!
Wanter Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 6:17 PM
I love your writing, BW, even when it is bittersweet.
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