Rather Chewy a Girl Scout

Rather chewy a Girl Scout
  cookie, laden
with coconut and chocolate
    nipped, directly
from the fridge
      chipped teeth
would not be delicious
so either wait for a Girl Scout
  cookie, to thaw
or oh dear me
    and
  bless her heart
microwave the Girl Scout
    treat, add
wholesome milk
  or
diet coke, with bits
    of ice, suffice
it to say
a Girl Scout’s
  rather nice
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Hind Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 11:27 PM
LOL -
Rodrigues Avatar
April 17, 2025 at 7:26 PM
Thanks!!!
Wolf Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 8:31 PM
Nothing worse than a frozen cookie!! ~ Miss Singh Tooth
Rodrigues Avatar
April 17, 2025 at 7:26 PM
LOL! Roaring…
Crandall Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 10:46 AM
When there's a will, there's a way. Microwave or milk sound like good approaches!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 17, 2025 at 7:27 PM
Yes! lol
Tor Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 11:07 PM
Love this reminder Kim of the many times I bought Girl Scout cookies the mint flavor ones I loved with chocolate and the coconut ones. Your poem is as sweet as the cookies. Hugs...
Rodrigues Avatar
March 10, 2025 at 5:46 AM
Thank you, Mike!
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 2:01 PM
I think I know the flavor you mean. It's my favorite. But I haven't bought them in decades. I haven't even baked my own cookies in years. Getting cancer makes us more likely to lay off the sweets. My hubbie always eats sweets. Lucky guy. He has had the worst diet for his 70 years of life and he just keeps surviving as if nutrition hardly matters!!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 5:34 PM
I get it. My D-I-L had to lay off sugar and alcohol due to cancer. Hugs
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 2:01 PM
Also cute writing
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 5:34 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Buhagiar Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 10:51 AM
I used to be in the Scouts when young. Lovely days.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 5:35 PM
Aww…so cool to know. My brother was a boy scout too!
DiMino Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 8:36 AM
Great recipe! Treatment. I use to love them, but they no longer come to the door -- mother's are fearful, and I can't blame them. Crazy world. But, on a brighter note, your poem is delightful -- good memories.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 8:45 AM
Thank you, Joe!
Rolland Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 7:38 AM
i am jealous, don't know much about "girls scouts", this looks quite magical, very well written and so cute
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 8:45 AM
Thank you, Yann! :)
Singh Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 9:05 PM
Postive qualities associated with girl scouts paving the way to become a perfect person. Like the poem
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 8:45 AM
Thank you, Akham!
Legros Kelley Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 2:45 PM
Two of my daughters were Girl Scouts, cookie time is a big deal, it was so hard to sell so MANY cookies! We loved the chocolate mint, yes, I bought a bunch of them!! Never thought to freeze them, that is a good idea, but microwave until thawed is true wisdom! My sister and I used to sneak frozen Hostess Ding Dongs from the freezer where my mom hid them and locked the freezer, we found the key :/ I wonder if I ever confessed that sin? Makes me feel bad now! Probably got a cavity or two from them!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 6:39 PM
LOL! I feel honored that you shared your story! Love it!
Mckeithan Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 1:05 PM
Nice one Kim. I have to have gluten free and they used to make a GF cookie and it was pretty good. Not sure if they do anymore.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 6:40 PM
Thank you! Hope you find a gluten free cookie. I imagine they sell one!
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