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Parents control what their kids are taught It's not a matter of them wanting to or not Go to school and get a job That's how people pay bills on these blocks Get married and have a kid That's what everyone I knew did While working full time Stressing and counting every dime Vacations on credit cards Outfits for sports and leotards Payments for the SUV or Chevy Malibu Could live in a smaller house Status would be demoted it you moved Taco Tuesdays cause Mondays are crazy Wed thru Fridays insane so weekends are lazy Exercise? When I have the chance I'll want to when I can't fit these pants Why am I overweight and tired? Cause I'm working overtime so I don't get fired Cycle goes round and round Not forever though, In 30 years I'll retire.....? This is a work in progress.

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Date: 8/21/2016 6:51:00 AM
Great write like Jan said. Not my idea of existence...Never was I guess. Best regards, Sharon. :) john P.s Sevens all round!
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Date: 6/6/2016 8:58:00 AM
Sad reality for many Sharon - great write:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/5/2016 3:45:00 PM
So true Sharon, I know a lot of people who are just living paycheck to paycheck just to make ends meet. Nice, realistic poem, hang in there and God Bless!:)
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