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Rat-A-Tat-Tat

When a jackhammer’s outside your door It’s a sound that you cannot ignore. You can’t focus or think And your brain’s on the brink Of a meltdown, like never before. For the rat-a-tat-rat-a-tat noise Is a sound that not merely annoys. It gets under your skin ‘Til it seems like it’s been Always there, as your mind it destroys. Now a city existence has quirks And though quiet’s not one of its perks, There are limits to what We can take, but it’s not Constant rat-a-tat-tatting that irks!

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Date: 3/6/2022 11:50:00 AM
great meter and content as always, Ilene. Maybe you need some really good ear plugs but I guess if you need to be awake, there is just nothing to do except grin and bear it.
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Date: 3/4/2022 12:13:00 PM
That rat-a-tat-tat reminds me of a woodpecker I used to have, only on speed! Thank you for the reminder.
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Date: 3/4/2022 10:20:00 AM
Earplugs won't contain vibrations, but Jeff is right in that woodpeckers are just as annoying! Enjoyed, Ilene! Aloha!
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Date: 3/3/2022 1:55:00 PM
Brings up a funny image - we have many pileated woodpeckers out here - perhaps they are the original angry birds, mad because they are city mice who got left in the country, taking it out on everyone else, ha!
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Date: 3/3/2022 1:04:00 PM
Lol, it's like a Chinese water torture, I'd invest in some good ear plugs. Tom
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