Rasta Ruben

On an cool Autumn night,
Eerie and full of dread.
...not fear...but locks.

Darkness is embraced by light,
Peace stirs in the midnight wind,
...not a calm...but a gesture of his hand.

Simple and sweet...a mystery hides 
Behind the pleasant mood.
...not a state of mind...but the smile on his face.

With a skull peering over his shoulder,
Silent growls begin to grrr.
...not growls of a wolf...but his hunger of sweets.

The mood begins to fade,
As a black bird paused in flight,
...not in the air...but on his shirt. 

Sets the tone for the night,
As he dresses up for Halloween,
...he’s not Bob Marley...he’s Rasta Ruben.




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For Carols Browns “Funny Spooks” contest
My reference material is in my blog photos...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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George   Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 1:33 AM
Very imaginative and creative, dear Raul. Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest. Love, Lainie
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October 2, 2009 at 1:46 PM
Just the right flavor for the up coming holiday. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Carol's contest. Enjoy your well-deserved honor. Wishing you many more. Karen
Richards Avatar
October 2, 2009 at 12:29 PM
This one was so much fun to read Raul!! It was at the top of my winner's list!! ~ Love, Carrie
Brown Avatar
October 2, 2009 at 9:34 AM
Congratulations and thank you for taking part in my contest Raul. Love, Carol
Martin Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 6:51 PM
Funny and differnt, good luck.
Peranteau Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 2:56 PM
Great write Ruben,..I'm not into the spooky stuff,..still very poetic !!! james
Lopez Avatar
September 7, 2009 at 6:37 PM
rasta ruben .......such a neat idea very funny rm
Culverhouse Avatar
September 7, 2009 at 5:52 PM
nicely done, sure to be a winner.
Brown Avatar
September 7, 2009 at 3:20 PM
Raul, thank you for entering my contest. Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
September 7, 2009 at 2:59 PM
Kool poem Raul, Rasta Ruben - this name just may stick>>James
Chircop Avatar
September 7, 2009 at 12:46 PM
Rasta Ruben...wel described..funny and spooky friend indeed--Charma
Shahwan Avatar
September 7, 2009 at 10:12 AM
Pretty poem.
Pickett Avatar
September 7, 2009 at 6:16 AM
"Rasta Ruben" I like this poem because it is well written, and also my roomate has dreads.... A white boy with locks..... I call him the balding hippie.......AWESOME.......:JP]
Kendrick Avatar
September 7, 2009 at 6:12 AM
Sounds spooky. Sara
Scoville Avatar
September 6, 2009 at 11:37 PM
Awesome write....Evil is my nickname my sisters gave me. Aleera is Wicked and Illyanna Demented. We are the Haunted Trio....The Southern Belle
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