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Rasta Ruben

On an cool Autumn night, Eerie and full of dread. ...not fear...but locks. Darkness is embraced by light, Peace stirs in the midnight wind, ...not a calm...but a gesture of his hand. Simple and sweet...a mystery hides Behind the pleasant mood. ...not a state of mind...but the smile on his face. With a skull peering over his shoulder, Silent growls begin to grrr. ...not growls of a wolf...but his hunger of sweets. The mood begins to fade, As a black bird paused in flight, ...not in the air...but on his shirt. Sets the tone for the night, As he dresses up for Halloween, ...he’s not Bob Marley...he’s Rasta Ruben. __________________________________ For Carols Browns “Funny Spooks” contest My reference material is in my blog photos...

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Date: 10/8/2009 1:33:00 AM
Very imaginative and creative, dear Raul. Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 10/2/2009 1:46:00 PM
Just the right flavor for the up coming holiday. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Carol's contest. Enjoy your well-deserved honor. Wishing you many more. Karen
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Date: 10/2/2009 12:29:00 PM
This one was so much fun to read Raul!! It was at the top of my winner's list!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 10/2/2009 9:34:00 AM
Congratulations and thank you for taking part in my contest Raul. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2009 6:51:00 PM
Funny and differnt, good luck.
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Date: 9/8/2009 2:56:00 PM
Great write Ruben,..I'm not into the spooky stuff,..still very poetic !!! james
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Date: 9/7/2009 6:37:00 PM
rasta ruben .......such a neat idea very funny rm
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Date: 9/7/2009 5:52:00 PM
nicely done, sure to be a winner.
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Date: 9/7/2009 3:20:00 PM
Raul, thank you for entering my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/7/2009 2:59:00 PM
Kool poem Raul, Rasta Ruben - this name just may stick>>James
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Date: 9/7/2009 12:46:00 PM
Rasta Ruben...wel described..funny and spooky friend indeed--Charma
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Date: 9/7/2009 10:12:00 AM
Pretty poem.
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Date: 9/7/2009 6:16:00 AM
"Rasta Ruben" I like this poem because it is well written, and also my roomate has dreads.... A white boy with locks..... I call him the balding hippie.......AWESOME.......:JP]
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Date: 9/7/2009 6:12:00 AM
Sounds spooky. Sara
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Date: 9/6/2009 11:37:00 PM
Awesome write....Evil is my nickname my sisters gave me. Aleera is Wicked and Illyanna Demented. We are the Haunted Trio....The Southern Belle
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