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Rare Snowfall

The snowfields of my childhood Are but memories today In mild winters where I now live Fifteen hundred miles away. But today I wakened to a sight That took me back in time. Bright snow lies glistening on the ground. The trees are wreathed with rime. My little year-round garden Is hunkered out of sight. Dire warnings on the TV-- There will be more snow tonight. The schools are closed and children Are sledding down the hills, Some partaking for the first time In a winter day of thrills. The roads are ice arenas which Few drivers can traverse. Cars lie abandoned by the side Or in the ditch or worse. In the winters of the long ago My daddy kept a sleigh And a horse or two to pull it On such a wintry day. Over-coats and galoshes Were ours in good supply, To get us through the winter's cold And snow drifts, mountain high. I wish that I could conjure up A horse and big red sleigh That I could take out for a drive On a sunny, winter's day. I'd gather up my grand-children In my big sled for a ride, To see the startling beauty of A wintry country-side. won 10th place

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Date: 11/5/2009 2:01:00 PM
Congratulations Joyce, wonderful poem. Pam
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Date: 11/5/2009 5:42:00 AM
I too have memories of sleigh rides through a winter-wonder land with my Grandad. Beuatiful poem, Joyce. Thank you for the precious memories. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Love, Lainie
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Date: 11/4/2009 9:09:00 PM
Congrats on your win in this wonderful poem, I really liked how it flowed--lovely write--thanks as well for the greetings!
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Date: 11/4/2009 7:41:00 PM
Beautiful Joyce .. lovely and well earned win in the Let It Snow contest.. congratulations and bravo on job well done.. keep at it and give us more beauties to read....I am quite honored to be sharing the same stage with u as an honorable mention... thankxxx for your encouraging words always regarding my poetry... luv the Soup... Linda-Marie, P.E. P.S. "Sweetheart" per HG
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Date: 11/4/2009 6:36:00 PM
Congratulations on this wonderful winning poem, Joyce! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 11/4/2009 4:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's Let It Snow contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2009 9:30:00 AM
Joyce, what a beautiful poem. Come to Scotland, you can play in the snow on the high ground>>James
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Date: 2/8/2009 11:48:00 PM
Love the sentimental feel to this one...and the cozy scene it creates. Donna G.
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Date: 2/8/2009 8:24:00 PM
I grew up in East Texas... snow was rare, indeed. My first snowfall I will always remember. It happened one night when I was a young musician in Nashville in 1965. As night fell, so did the snow. It fell in big, soft flakes that silenced the world. I was captivated by the magic of it and walked in it for hours. Later, that year, I was drafted and wound up in Vietnam. Sometimes, when the heat got bad, I would seek relief in the memory of that snow. You brought it back to me. Thanks
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Date: 2/8/2009 5:58:00 PM
Absolutely wonderful. I love this poem. Your description almost makes me feel I was there.
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Date: 2/8/2009 5:50:00 PM
I love the memory in this piece and also the longing. I love the journey of going back and reliving becoming new again from the ride taken..Lovely piece of work.
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