Rapture You Roughly -

She pleaded to me with a blushed body,
ready readily for the holiday my maintinance could muster for her pink engine,
the electricity my overtime bedtime love ryhme induces, innerbody outerbody attention,
my woman pled and I fed, her skin smelled like sweet leather, expensive and exotic,
her taste, oh her taste,
a salt infused with inimitable vanilla extract of erotica,
shes my virgin tonight, shes my soul purpose, my handicraft her sole investment,
my rough hands ceaselessly surveying the surface of her vulnerable and vital being,
no flaws are found, because no flaws are sought, no resistense, nothing fought,
upright together, gripping her nape, kissing the pulse on throat,
flaxen hair swiming across my focused face, one arm around lower curve of back,
in unison the slots inbetween my thumb and index sweep upon her breast
cleverly turning & tightning into nipples elevated for enclosing excitment,
eyelashes grazing my cheek and her moist mouth on earlobe
elicit the need for perpendicular laying, for ramming motion ritual,
I unfold her, with fingers lovingly clasped on that nimble neck of hers
as I insert and glide with a job to do, a love to pursue,
the words came latter, instinct inspired now -

J.A.B.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 8/16/2014 2:52:00 PM
Enjoyed my second time through this, Justin...SO passionate and RAW...Loved it.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/17/2014 1:34:00 AM
Yes....it is
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Justin Bordner
Date: 8/17/2014 12:12:00 AM
To manhandle the woman you love is a glorious work Eileen. To make a woman the masterpiece of my focus, drive and skill is a blessing. Raw love is good love Eileen...J.A.B.
Date: 1/22/2014 9:09:00 AM
Good morning Justin, I'm going down the list, and so far I read every poem I clicked on... LOL, I will keep clicking till I find one I missed... :)..Linda
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Justin Bordner
Date: 1/23/2014 1:23:00 AM
This Rapture is all yours Linda, all yours J.A.B.
Date: 1/16/2014 10:50:00 AM
Damn. . . sensual and beyond.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 1/16/2014 1:18:00 PM
Yeah Jay, I make make my women ''the 1st order of priority.' Thanks, J.A.B.
Date: 1/15/2014 5:09:00 PM
A very beautiful and sensual write, Justin. These words seemed to flow so effortlessly from your heart. An amazing poem!...Thank you so much for the wonderful comments!
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Justin Bordner
Date: 1/15/2014 6:24:00 PM
My pleasure Kelly. Amazing how writers can discern smooth inspiration visa viz struggled design. Thanks Kelly. J.A.B.
Date: 1/14/2014 1:54:00 PM
Justine....very powerful write about need and satisfaction. Sensual in every way....great write....
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Justin Bordner
Date: 1/15/2014 6:20:00 PM
Coming from a great writer of sensuality your comment has special import Eileen. Its all about touch. J.A.B.
Date: 1/12/2014 3:23:00 AM
this Justin is fantastic well done Shadow x smile hug (7)(fave)
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Justin Bordner
Date: 1/13/2014 12:56:00 AM
Poetry deserves to be applied to aspects of our existence Shadow. I thank you for embracing this poem. Honored by your choice : ) J.A.B.
Date: 1/11/2014 12:38:00 AM
OoO, well done sir
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Justin Bordner
Date: 1/11/2014 1:51:00 AM
Thanks for the respect James. J.A.B.
Date: 1/6/2014 2:47:00 PM
A very sensual and passilonate poem indeed !Charma
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Justin Bordner
Date: 1/8/2014 2:14:00 AM
As they say Charma, 'If you love what you do then you won't work a day in your life...' Thanks for enjoying my write. J.A.B.
Date: 1/5/2014 9:30:00 PM
Justin, sending soup mail...Linda
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Justin Bordner
Date: 1/8/2014 2:10:00 AM
Excellent!
Date: 12/24/2013 3:44:00 AM
Justin--Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
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Justin Bordner
Date: 12/26/2013 1:05:00 AM
Thank you so very much Linda. Thank you for allowing me to realize new and beautiful wonders through your unparalled ability my Sphinx. J.A.B.
Date: 12/17/2013 7:16:00 PM
You are a fantabulous writer! So exotic, erotic. The fabulous comparison between the cherished car and cherished woman is brilliant.. :)
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Justin Bordner
Date: 12/19/2013 11:51:00 AM
So jolly to know that I can get you reved up Karen. I give free estimates too! Thanks for the kind words my friend. J.A.B.
Date: 12/17/2013 1:50:00 PM
- Thanks for all the beautiful poems you have shared with me this year, Justin ! :) - I wish you a beautiful and peaceful Christmas! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Justin Bordner
Date: 12/19/2013 11:36:00 AM
Anne, you are immeasurably sweet, and infallibly unselfish. I am proud to be your colleague. J.A.B.
Date: 12/3/2013 2:59:00 PM
Hey again, Justin! : ) What can I say? Glad to read more of your work! Very bold and concupiscent imagery here; love the line - "no flaws are found, because no flaws are sought, no resistense, nothing fought" It all flows very nicely with enrapturing purpose. Take care my friend. Write on! Always, Laura
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 12/10/2013 11:14:00 PM
Well you composed so well I had to return and reread again. : ) I hope you're doing well and keeping warm.Happy holidays, friend.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 12/4/2013 2:00:00 PM
Your support means much to me Laura - great word, concupiscence!!!!!! - erotic composition are a thrill, sentimental, and very challenging to compose well - J.A.B. %
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