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Rapture

Rapture I stood on the edge of a moment afraid Then I stepped in to live it It has no past, no future, no questions, and no answers Yet it holds a lifetime of emotion Like an exquisite snowflake on a silent night It will fall to earth never loosing it magnificent rapture It’s ecstasy remembered only by you and me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/20/2010 6:51:00 PM
wow this is one is very strong to the mind images thank you
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Date: 11/19/2010 6:38:00 PM
Beautiful, if only we could fully experience the penultimate events in our life. If we did, then the residual reward would be precious memories that would last a lifetime. The vapor from your melted snow flake still intoxicates you! You know, poets are great revisionists. They can add beauty and burnishment to events past. You have artfully recreated this event, and given it luster and shine.
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Date: 11/18/2010 12:28:00 PM
a beautiful write Karen,, enjoyed,..p.d.
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