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Rapture

The shadow grows across the gable. Time for the sparrow to roost and rest. Night bird calls, sadden my brow to know You no longer caress my hand. Your carriage left one day Carried you, my love, so far My love rests upon a weeping willow beside the flowing brook. We shall meet in sweet chariot to ride away in the ocra sky. At dusk, I watch and wait, my love, For the rumble of hooves and smell of home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/27/2010 12:29:00 PM
A beautifully expressed free verse poem of love and longing, Doris, very well written with crystal clear imagery in every line! Carl.
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Date: 6/22/2010 1:28:00 PM
This is double rapture...Now in the Spirit no one else can comprehend and someday soon in the physical I shall be gone..Mom
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Date: 6/22/2010 5:45:00 AM
Beautiful written....Lovely words...Be Bless Patricia
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Date: 6/20/2010 11:51:00 PM
One word.. Doris ...excellent one for the favourites.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/20/2010 6:20:00 PM
A beautiful write Doris. God Bless Phyl
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