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Rapture

Let’s take the slow boat, in a lake of love afloat, bliss mists our soul’s sole emote. As boundaries blur and nodes within our form stir, with throb of love we concur.

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Date: 6/10/2024 1:32:00 AM
Not an easy form to write. I am no judge really, but from what I read, it seems the second stanza has great contrast.
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Date: 6/10/2024 2:53:00 AM
Delighted you enjoyed, Victor. Thank you for dropping by

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