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Raping of That Virgin Drop of Rain

So pristine each drop wrapped tenderly by clouds as air into water processed. Why a diamond shaped of natures play or of gravity earth awaits, greedily life yearned for its fall from grace. Longing for its purity Man restless, salivating for the angelic virgin to descend. Unspoiled, unsoiled, sweetness itself only God can create, a gift free not for man alone but every living thing with desires to quench. Alas! the greed in you and I, it was a gift...free. Reached we have, into the space of angels, we bastardised the very food of our souls for can our thirst be quenched by oil or gold? Answer ye to God when our time is done. A virgin so pure God sent for our pains to endure. Slashed, burnt smoke of 'acid' we returned. Legacy left we are sure, but the poser imminent when facing our Procurer; were we party to the deflowering, the raping of that virgin drop of rain? T M Ioane (April, 2014)

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/24/2014 7:55:00 AM

"There shall be showers of blessings this is the promise of love there shall be seasons refreshing sent from the Savior above" Showers showers of blessings we need mercy drops round us is falling but for the showers we plead"..Hymnal >>Enjoyed reading your work..We all need those spiritual blessings poured out upon us..Sara

Tiaua M Ioane
Date: 4/25/2014 7:50:00 AM

You are such a sweet. soul dear Sara, we really need God's mercy and showers of blessing. Thanks. for commenting, Alofas, Tiaua.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/23/2014 10:46:00 AM

ohh how we defrock the environ without restraint.... each stanza taken and portrayed perfectly with a dark mood.. splendid, TM.. huggs

Tiaua M Ioane
Date: 4/25/2014 4:13:00 AM

Dear Nette thanks for taking time to visit, your comments are always so valuable to me. Love your work, once again thanks. Alofas, Tiaua.

John Pen

Date: 4/22/2014 3:17:00 AM

Is it really "development" when the environment is wasted in the process? Maybe not. Excellent piece

Tiaua M Ioane
Date: 4/24/2014 10:49:00 PM

I thank you for dropping by especially the comment, there is more than enough for our needs but when we become greedy, the environment suffers. Alofas, Tiaua.

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 4/16/2014 1:52:00 PM

This is by far the best I've read all day!!! Incredible write...love the message and the feel it gave after reading.

Tiaua M Ioane
Date: 4/18/2014 3:18:00 PM

Wow! Those comments- what an honour and coming from such talented poet like you dear Pacer. You are all in my prayers on this Easter day, celebrating nature's bounty and all God's free gifts we are enjoying. God bless and thank you once again for your encouraging comments. Alofas. Tiaua.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/5/2014 7:22:00 AM

SUPERB writing and SUPERB theme! How much my dear we are in agreement! The last two poems I wrote (not so poetically as yours} have as their subject the environment: LAST WARNING and THE TODDLER. For some one to understand though needs a tender soul as yours my dear Tiaua! Many alofas!

Tiaua M Ioane
Date: 4/11/2014 2:45:00 PM

Dearest friend, sorry for the lateness in replying. Your work is always poetically superior and has my respect, I am so glad that you share our concern with climate change, our islands are slowly drowning. Thanks for your constant support dear Demetrios. Lots of alofas, Tiaua.

Jeremy Street

Date: 4/1/2014 6:37:00 PM

Probably More Like Ignorant Unto Their Own Truths ? Myoptic Sight A Beast Ever Gazing Into His Amisful Mirrors, Oblong Lies....Surely There Is A Fallout Across Her Skies Suffering Time They Blink She Cries Yet Alas, A Star Does Shine * This Is Exquisite In Both Profound As Beautiful! Easy To Proclaim That Indeed, This Masterpiece, Belongs In Faves: Big Time Ku's Unto You Quite A Voice, Via Poetic Painting....Love, Jeremy

Tiaua M Ioane
Date: 4/2/2014 4:08:00 AM

Dear Jeremy, you did really made my day today with your poetic charms. Thank you for your exquisite comments especially the beautiful presentation. Alofas, Tiaua.

Rob Carter

Date: 4/1/2014 4:33:00 PM

Very good Tiaua, and unfortunately so true. Well written thought provoking message. Rob

Tiaua M Ioane
Date: 4/2/2014 1:56:00 AM

Such encouraging words dear Rob, especially for us still trying to find our feet. Thank you so much for the visit, alofas. Tiaua.

Chuck Melugin

Date: 3/28/2014 9:25:00 AM

Dear Tiaua, So original! So true! So brilliant! 7 My best, Chuck

Tiaua M Ioane
Date: 3/29/2014 6:01:00 PM

Dear Chuck, thank you for understanding and commenting. It means a lot, very encouraging!! Alofas, Tiaua.

Aiyah Torres

Date: 3/28/2014 8:44:00 AM

what a great imagery here , Tiaua.. I love it!!! ..at first i am thinking of other way around..but when i gone beyond til the end..i understand what's the meaning it's trying to convey... Great job!!! ^__^

Tiaua M Ioane
Date: 3/30/2014 6:05:00 AM

Dearest AiyaH (beautiful name) so sorry Ireplied last night but my ancient laptop is really playing up, I look forward to your comments, thanks a lot for reading and understanding this piece, Loved your dropping in. Lots of alofas. Tiaua.