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Rapids of the Mind

Rapids of the mind, moving at a furious pace as if there is no time to waste. A boat with oars... a raving raft… on all fours. In my dry suit, flapping like a seal. No way on earth I head for shore where there be bears. I flop back into the boat, pulled in by the hucksters who mock, they think this is a joke whereas I shake, terrified. Are there bears in the boat? Are they dressed up like folks? Might they tear me asunder? Mighty thunder rolls the boat. Who do they think is in charge? It’s not me nor they, but the Superstar. He always knows the way. They say, “Yes, sir, Captain, sir,” and row us to the peaceful shore. 8/2/2020

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Date: 8/5/2020 11:24:00 AM
I wish I had been in this journey of your mind with you!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2020 4:09:00 PM
:) Smiling!
Date: 8/2/2020 11:54:00 AM
Wow! This is such a powerful inspiration Kim. Lovely :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2020 12:21:00 PM
Thank you, Aditi!
Date: 8/2/2020 8:25:00 AM
Incredibly done, Kim Panagiotaxx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2020 12:20:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 8/2/2020 7:57:00 AM
The mind is incredible...you really need a good captain to guide it's sails...Well done
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2020 9:28:00 AM
Amen! Thanks, my friend!

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