Rapids of the Mind

Rapids of the mind,
moving at a furious pace
as if there is no time to waste.

A boat with oars...
a raving raft…
on all fours.

In my dry suit, flapping like a seal.
No way on earth I head for shore
where there be bears.

I flop back into the boat,
pulled in by the hucksters
who mock,
they think this is a joke
whereas I shake, terrified.

Are there bears in the boat?
Are they dressed up like folks?
Might they tear me asunder?

Mighty thunder rolls the boat.
Who do they think is in charge?
It’s not me nor they,
but the Superstar.
He always knows the way.

They say, “Yes, sir, Captain, sir,” 
and row us to the peaceful shore.

8/2/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 11:24 AM
I wish I had been in this journey of your mind with you!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 4:09 PM
:) Smiling!
Mishra Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 11:54 AM
Wow! This is such a powerful inspiration Kim. Lovely :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 12:21 PM
Thank you, Aditi!
Romios Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 8:25 AM
Incredibly done, Kim Panagiotaxx
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 12:20 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Michael Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 7:57 AM
The mind is incredible...you really need a good captain to guide it's sails...Well done
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 9:28 AM
Amen! Thanks, my friend!
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