Rape

. Rape . . hate watches forced passion brutally burn… help? . Dedicated to GOD’S gay and lesbian CHILDREN, raped. May GOD BLESS THEM through the pain © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen February 15, 2010 Poetic form: Lanterne

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Syed Amaan Ahmad

Date: 2/18/2010 10:05:00 PM

I wish people could understand freedom and liberty... world is so strange... very well written....

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/16/2010 7:33:00 PM

Excellently written Dane Ann on a very serious subject matter... u have explained it so intricately in your Lanterne.. thankxx for your very special comments on my poetry today.. I see the End Line Word contest is going well.. so glad for u.. my friend... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 2/16/2010 4:27:00 PM

Hi, Miss Dawn, thank you for your kind remarks on my lyric. I like to see wit as well as wisdom in any song lyric, so... Rape is horrible, especially against children, regardless of who or what they might be or purpot to be. Jesuse Christ had some very potent words for those adults in Matthew, I believe. We would all do well to read them and let he who has ears, let him take heed. Regards, GERard.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/16/2010 12:40:00 PM

A good topic to address, and of course, rape is wrong in any situation. This poem makes me think of a poem I wrote about hate crimes. Maybe one to post soon! I am glad you are watching out for our gay and lesbian friends! LUv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/16/2010 11:09:00 AM

I am not really sure your meaning here in this one. I could go several different ways in the interpertation of it. Yesterday Oprah's show was about males being abused and molested by their mothers. This nearly broke my heart. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Jared Pickett

Date: 2/16/2010 6:52:00 AM

I agree.... Although, friends of mine who are same sex connoisseurs are very confident in their sexuality.... Some of my best friends, cocky like me...... Good thoughts put to pen my friend.....:JP]

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 2/16/2010 3:47:00 AM

Great message of sympathy, RAPE is to be condemed in what ever fashion Daniel