Jennifer Fenn Poet Verse

Range

Ridged peaks, rolling foothills
reach over our region,
rest under snow blankets,
recover from roiling,
raging summer wildfires.
Reeling smoke will only
return with a vengeance.



Pleiades R contest
Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Paris-Maree Boreham August 25, 2021 at 7:08 AM great hook Jennifer, great verse!! Jennifer Fenn August 25, 2021 at 12:59 PM Thank you Paris-Maree! Glad you visited me today.

Ann Foster May 15, 2021 at 7:43 PM There is a sense of fear to this read... Wow.. Great imagery. Ann Jennifer Fenn May 15, 2021 at 9:25 PM Thank you Ann! Glad you like it. Thank you for stopping by.

Barry Stebbings May 1, 2021 at 4:04 AM Very painterly poem, Jennifer. As Thomas says, good alliteration. // Barry Jennifer Fenn May 1, 2021 at 3:41 PM Barry! Hi! Thank you for stopping by with encouraging words.

Thomas Wells April 30, 2021 at 5:34 PM I love your skillful use of alliteration throughout this poem. Your images come to life. You are a gifted poet, Jennifer. Jennifer Fenn May 1, 2021 at 3:39 PM Thank you Thomas! That makes my Saturday! You’re talented yourself.

Vijay Pandit April 30, 2021 at 5:37 AM Your images paint the scene so well. Excellent write, Jennifer. Jennifer Fenn April 30, 2021 at 5:13 PM Thank you Vijay! So glad you stopped by.

Robert Pettit April 28, 2021 at 6:52 PM A good choice by Kim to be a winner in her contest. Jennifer Fenn April 30, 2021 at 5:13 PM Thank you Robert! Great to be visited by you!

Susan Ashley April 20, 2021 at 6:20 PM Jennifer, your imagery is vibrant and beautifully expressed. Congratulations for your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Jennifer Fenn April 21, 2021 at 10:35 AM Thank you Susan! I love the word vibrant. Hugs to you Poetry Sister!

Silent One April 20, 2021 at 2:23 PM Love the vivid imagery . Done so well . Jennifer Fenn April 21, 2021 at 10:34 AM Thank you Silent One! So great to hear from you! I hope all is well for you. Blessings, Jennifer

Kim Merryman April 19, 2021 at 4:06 PM Vivid imagery and smooth flowing lines! Well done, Jennifer! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M Jennifer Fenn April 19, 2021 at 9:15 PM Thank you Kim! Your contest was fun!

Michelle Faulkner April 17, 2021 at 3:12 PM The landscape is so expansive, I like the contrast of snow blankets and wildfires, there's an element of danger running through this, best wishes for the contest! Jennifer Fenn April 17, 2021 at 9:49 PM Thank you Michelle! So happy you like my poem!