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Randomling Snowflakes

Snowflakes slowly parachuting together
                                     In the still of the night
                               On mother nature's military invasion














Michael Tor 8/28/2015

Copyright © Michael Tor | Year Posted 2015

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Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/26/2022 11:55:00 AM Oh I love this!! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/13/2016 7:50:00 PM This is SO cool. had to go way back to earlier poems of yours because I have seen all your newer ones. Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 9/16/2015 11:04:00 AM Nice visual. Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 9/22/2015 6:13:00 PM Thank you James

Suzanne Delaney Date: 9/12/2015 2:22:00 PM This is wonderful. They do float down like parachutes. Great imagery, SuZ Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 9/22/2015 6:13:00 PM Thank you Suzanne for your nice comments.

Ralph Sergi Date: 9/9/2015 3:08:00 PM Great metaphoric poem, Michael! Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 9/10/2015 11:05:00 PM Thank you so much Ralph.

Balveen Cheema Date: 9/9/2015 11:37:00 AM The mere thought of snowflakes parachuting is amazing! Congrats, Michael! Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 9/10/2015 12:41:00 AM Thank you so much Balveen for your observation.

Eve Roper Date: 9/9/2015 9:55:00 AM I love the image that you created congratulations on your win hugs Eve Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 9/9/2015 10:59:00 AM Thank you Eve.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 9/9/2015 1:40:00 AM Very wonderful write Michael n a superb win! Big congrats! Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 9/9/2015 11:00:00 AM Thank you Dr Upma

Mary Rotman Date: 9/8/2015 11:21:00 PM Michael, I have some feedback for you on your winning randomling. If you'd like it, please let me know how i can get ahold of you. Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 9/9/2015 11:01:00 AM OK Mary. I have to completely register.

Skat A Date: 9/8/2015 1:37:00 AM Wonderful Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 9/9/2015 11:01:00 AM Thank you Skat

Constance La France Date: 8/30/2015 7:04:00 PM Michael, very nice for the contest and thanks for visiting my poem ~~ Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 8/31/2015 7:31:00 AM Thank you for your sweet comment.

Michael Tor Date: 8/30/2015 6:31:00 AM Thank you Sir. I appreciate your thoughtful words. Login to Reply

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/30/2015 5:32:00 AM Majestic image! A seven, dear Michael! Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 8/30/2015 8:10:00 PM Thank you Demetrios.