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Random Thoughts 49 Haiku--Tanka--Haiku

Haiku-Tanka-Haiku 5,7,5 -- 5,7,5,7,7 -- 5,7,5 Evil brews, no rules, looming witches ride their brooms, demon eyed ghouls drool. Potions have been brewed, voodoo dolls alter my mood. Serial killers, dead become walking dead, I feel like I'm in "Thriller" Vampires, Ware-wolves, Kruger and Micheal Meyers, stalking to retire.. Jared Pickett 9/8/2010 Asavvy1

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Skat A

Date: 3/5/2014 4:57:00 PM

Jared, amazing to see the women I love and adore here on your poem. It makes me feel welcomed. Jared, this form is very unique, is it your own? SKAT

Jared Pickett
Date: 3/6/2014 12:32:00 AM

I combined two forms to create one. Thank you..Asavvy1

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2011 11:02:00 PM

Jared, nice,, for October,,love your haikus, thank you for sharing.. May the magic of writing fill your days here on the soup. May all your dreams come true this holiday season. I hope you are enjoying the blessings that Christmas brings.. filling our hearts with hope and joy, just take care of yourself... once again enjoyed your poem,,always,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/29/2010 4:57:00 AM

Hey Mr. Random Thoughts... a great blog u created the other day.. hope u are having fun..cause fun is the key to a good life.. enjoy and everything else goes well luv.. my honey poo is in the hospital .. had emergency surgery Thanksgiving Day night for gall bladder.. we thought he was having a heart attack from three days of pain but finally ..relief.. he will be out on Tuesday .. so thinking I almost lost him.. more reasons to have FUN luv.. so who is this mystery lady who has your heart? ..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/12/2010 9:02:00 AM

Did u read the poem Scarlett wrote for u for my contest luv? u must read it.. what a description she put on us all.. awesome but I already had envisioned it all way before her lovely lines praising u ... ASavvy 1...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/12/2010 9:01:00 AM

Well Mr. J.. my darling friend... I dug deep as u asked and since Soup was down for almots 24 hours yesterday .. I just posted and entered my praise poetry of my muse... have so many but she is tops to me.. as yours is to u..luv... the Ode is a difficult form but I followed the example on the P.S. site for guidance and wrote four stanzas in this way ... so when u read..u need ..full concentration to 'get it'..luv.. enjoy..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/24/2010 8:00:00 AM

ohhhh too scary and self perpetuating too! I wish you well! Light & Love and if you might add a comment on my blog I would appreciate it?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2010 8:45:00 PM

Yes, it is a great combo tanka/haiku! Did you do one for Linda's contest yet? With a little doctoring of the tanka, this would fit her contest perfectly!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/8/2010 6:00:00 PM

Nice combination of haiku Tanka- , enjoyed it. Jared. Really a nice entry for halloween contest. Good luck

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/8/2010 1:56:00 PM

Interesting thoughts penned about the soon coming time of the year..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/8/2010 12:02:00 PM

thankxxx for supporting my contest with this excellent write Jared... but the contest calls for three verses all Haiku.. would u mind ??? I luv it like this so write me another with same words in first and third and put some of second in three lines of Haiku for middle ... would u mind???? luv u forever...and won't tell Ron either..luv.. good luck .. appreciate..