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Random Thoughts 46 the Pleiades

Hurricane Harsh winds Heave cars and Hinder paradise Homes. Heavy, flooding rain, Hammering Hail shreds, hysteria explodes.. Jared Pickett 4/23/2010 Asavvy1

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/3/2010 6:31:00 AM

not a good one to read on this stormy day-- now I am looking over my shoulder!!LOL

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/25/2010 9:24:00 AM

Is there really a Hurricaine where you live?I doubt it..this sounds like an emotional Hurricaine,,I never had a hurricaine in my Country..Emotional ones i had plenty:).Powerful...Poem...CharmA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2010 8:57:00 PM

well, you should know if you are in Florida!! Have you been actually in one? thanks for the blog comment! Luv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/24/2010 8:31:00 AM

Awesome use of alliteration to describe the power and destruction of hurricanes, Jared. The hurricane season is fast approaching, so this is timely as well. Very nice! Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/23/2010 6:28:00 PM

have you had a hurricane? Hope you are well!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/23/2010 12:52:00 PM

Interesting thoughts on the destruction of Mother Nature... its almost like a really bad romantic luv affair.. but I won't go there ..OK? its all good now so enough said..luv your blog today and good luck to your Broncos but only if u cheer for my Giants..deal? luv.. "Sweetheart"