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Random Thoughts

Random thoughts Seen throughout my head Dreams explored Image scored Random enough to confuse Even the expert Russell Sivey *Form: Shadorma 3/5/3/3/7/5

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Robert Pettit

Date: 1/29/2012 7:27:00 PM

This is another interesting poetic form. You have rendered a fine example here Russell.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2012 5:16:00 PM

Yep, I think most experts would be confused by us poets here!! heehee. Dreams are confusing, I think even to ourselves. How did I remember all the candies. The answer is very easy: Google. hahaha. (I knew them all of course, but no way could all those names have come back to me without a little help)

Lizzie Treetop

Date: 1/29/2012 3:31:00 PM

Not only do you get youg Don thinking , yoiu get us all thinking Russell. Good write food for thought! Lizzie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/29/2012 7:04:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this morning..I have seen someone else do this form but can't remember if I did one or not..I will have to check it out..Yes, those thoughts that penentrate our mind day and night..Sometimes I wonder from where could that thought have come..If for a contest, reads like a winner...In a few minutes of time, your encouraging words lifted my sagging spirit..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/29/2012 12:27:00 AM

ohh,russell.. i introduced this form months ago and did a contest on shardorma.. am still requesting TPS to include this in our list; no reply yet... a splendid write with hazes of dreamy limages... i like! :) huggs!

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 1/29/2012 12:01:00 AM

Looks like I caught yet another new one from you! This one flows real nicely. I love this form, though it's new to me! Keep on typing Free Russell!~For some reason I just had a funny memory, Did you ever watch SNL back in the 90's? "and now DEEP THOUGHTS By Jack Handey!" I sure hope you know what I'm talkin about...because It WILL make ya laugh~ Don't ask why I thought of it...Randomness flows tonight, I Suppose!

Don Johnson

Date: 1/28/2012 9:59:00 PM

Random Russell confusion reigns, says brain explain, whatever is in notion, expert knows, not there goes, Russells instigation, arose.... seeds from thought plantation.. johnson dunno?