Ramesses Ii, Remembered Still

No raised pinnacle marked the place
No pure white limestone shining
Where Ramesses slept looked commonplace
to foil the robbers scrying.
Yet he had moved the earth and sky
this pharaoh disdained all rivals.
His bounty buried beneath the sand
portrayed a life beneath blue skies 
his star encrusted tomb ethereal        
his Ka rising from Death’s hand.

The hills of Thebes his place of rest   
and beneath him his father lay            
amongst the great he’d be the highest 
his battle standards on display.             
He ruled with iron hand on staff          
as a Godhead he was portrayed.           
Most mighty and acclaimed, no man
was he, who felled the Hittite chaff;    
beneath his chariots wheels flayed      
the denizens of Egypt’s land.

Worshiped was he in temples true
his semblance graces Abu Simbel       
with eyes wide o’er lake so blue
his gaze belays the infidels.  
Beside him she, Nefertari
laid claim to a sacred place
held above all others his wife
most renowned for her beauty
a love to last through time and space
may all true hearts pay such tariff.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/10/2011 10:23:00 AM
:) Thanks for supporting the contest, Deb. Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 12/31/2010 3:04:00 PM
Wasn't he the bad guy in the Bible? and didn't he want to keep the children of Israel as slaves? this is the same Ramses u write of here? I only remember how mean he was in The Ten Commandments movie... and did he really keep up with all those wives? wonderful write TEACH...
Login to Reply
Date: 12/30/2010 9:54:00 PM
I love the flow of your work,the elements of your poetry are very balanced and have such energy.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/30/2010 4:53:00 PM
The feeling i got was warm and sad all mixed up together. see someone care so deeply and hoping the child would be OK!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/30/2010 7:28:00 AM
Wonderful remembrance of this great Egyptian king, who was perhaps the best among all the Pharaoh. You have sketched a brilliant picture of his otherwise forgotten achievements for Egypt my friend. It is a mile stone monument crafted by you for this great hero of the bygone history. I have placed a new Poem 'Rain, The Story'. Hope you would read it. My good wishes for a Happy and Prosperous New Year....Ravindra...Deborah Guzzi
Login to Reply
Date: 12/30/2010 4:32:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this morning Deborah. Thank you for your comments and all the help you have given to me this past year. I appreciate all you have done. I will be back after the New Year to read more of your poetry. Wishing you a very Happy New Year. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 12/30/2010 3:46:00 AM
It has been a while since have read your most excellent writes. Nice piece so profesionally done by one of the Soups best.
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter