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The park came alive and glistened this morning. It would be sunny today, obvious since dawning. Four days of rain had given the grass a new hue. The trees looked lush, were embellished as new. Early morning all was quiet, peaceful and serene. It was quite the loveliest the park had ever been. Rain rendered the surroundings to a lustrous view. The sunshine illuminated all and shone through. The kindergarten now opened adjoining the park. Children arriving. On the silence they left their mark. Wonderful giggles and chatter now could be heard. Everyone seemed happy, not a discouraging word. Now the rain had gone, finally outside they could play. No more raincoats to wear. Won’t be trapped inside today. Children raced round having fun, each and every tiny tot. The noise oh the noise! They sure were a rambunctious lot.

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Date: 8/5/2023 4:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your First Place Win! Beautiful imagination, wonderful Childrens story, it warmed me so. I Am Anaya
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Date: 8/16/2023 9:17:00 PM
Thank you so very much Anaya.
Date: 8/5/2023 3:59:00 AM
After the rain, the plants will wear coats of green and children will get out of their house to play. Altogether the earth will be teeming with life. Beautiful poem.... SV. Congratulations on your first place win
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Date: 8/16/2023 9:17:00 PM
Thank you so very much Valsa
Date: 8/3/2023 9:18:00 AM
Nice poem depicting the lush nature and joys of young children.
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Date: 8/16/2023 9:18:00 PM
Thank you so very much Jay

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